Stick War: A war comedy

[Mad Mask]

Greetings fellow playgrounders,

It's been nearly a month since I've been writing the scripts of this new webcomic and designing characters, and I've finally put them together to get the first strip of Stick Wars (Starwars reference indended). Here it is:

Prologue Part 1(Warning Large Image)
http://www.valerie-lewis.org/stickwars/Stick-War1.gif

Original Prologue Part 1(Warning Large Image)
http://www.valerie-lewis.org/stickwars/stickwars1.png
Original Prologue Part 2 (Warning Large Image)
http://www.valerie-lewis.org/stickwars/stickwars2.gif

Comments on the art are welcome.

[Omicroncubed]

That's good, mad mask :smallbiggrin:

[Nightwing]

The heads are on the wrong side in last panel.

[Calamity]

The heads are on the wrong side in last panel.

What? No they're not. He turned around.

[Bayar]

a funny first strip, keep up the good work !

[Ichneumon]

I liked it. But I never liked Star Wars so many of the references I will not get/find funny. This was a funny comic though.

[Mad Mask]

New comic !
Prologue Part 2 (Warning Large Image)
http://www.valerie-lewis.org/stickwars/stickwars2.gif

[darkblade]

The 'Hot Chick' is supposed to look like Miko right?

[Raistlin1040]

I saw what you did there. Undead Miko. For shame!

[Mad Mask]

The 'Hot Chick' is supposed to look like Miko right?

I'll say yes.

[Szilard]

I liked it. But I never liked Star Wars so many of the references I will not get/find funny. This was a funny comic though.

So far the only Star wars referance was the title itself.

[Dallas-Dakota]

Awesome......

[banjo1985]

Nice...as an office worker gate bueracracy makes me laugh :smallbiggrin:

Hopefully there'll be few Star Wars references, I haven't seen half the movies.

[Sneak]

Nice!

Only that bothers me is the title (there have been so many comics and cartoons called Stick Wars, it's ridiculous). But that's not really a big deal.

Awesome start.

[Omicroncubed]

Awesome

I'm looking forward to the next one.

[Mad Mask]

So... it's been a while since I've uploaded the last comic. I didn't finish the new strip, but I've decided to redo the first two comic (I'll still keep the original ones).

Here it is:
http://www.valerie-lewis.org/stickwars/Stick-War1.gif