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Omega
2007-12-16, 10:44 AM
This comic is called Burn. It is not completing with the other webcomics, this comic is just a free-from of expression.
Prologue - Here We Go...
http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m241/jasonphantom/img003-1.jpg
Comic 1 - Don't Do Drugs, Guy
http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m241/jasonphantom/img004-1.jpg
Comic 2 - Side-Tracked
http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m241/jasonphantom/img005-1.jpg
Characters:
http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m241/jasonphantom/img001-1.jpghttp://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m241/jasonphantom/img002-1.jpg
Marlock94
2007-12-16, 01:30 PM
thats kinda cool i guess. :smallsmile:
Omega
2007-12-16, 03:22 PM
thats kinda cool i guess. :smallsmile:
It is only the beginning. :smallamused:
EDIT: Plus it is only freeform.
Ichneumon
2007-12-16, 03:34 PM
Wait, this is the first page of your comic?
I like it, but I do not think you should create new threads for each comic.
Omega
2007-12-16, 06:06 PM
Wait, this is the first page of your comic?
I like it, but I do not think you should create new threads for each comic.
1) Yes, it is.
2) Why in the world would I not make separate threads? :smallconfused:
Lyinginbedmon
2007-12-16, 06:19 PM
2) Why in the world would I not make separate threads? :smallconfused:
Because it clutters an already-cluttered board. Most webcomics have the individual strips spoilered or linked to in their first post, with notifications in additional posts with the spoilered new strips.
Almighty Salmon
2007-12-16, 06:23 PM
"I'm going to kill myself!"
"No, Wait! Have a shovel!"
"I have seen the light!"
Awesome :smalltongue:
Omega
2007-12-17, 12:58 PM
@Lyinginbedmon: Okay.
@Almighty Salmon: Thanks I try. :smallredface:
Omega
2007-12-19, 10:10 AM
Comic 2, up!
http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m241/jasonphantom/img005-1.jpg
Comments: The Shovel is now law!
I'd advise against 4th-wall breaking jokes this early in the strip. It somewhat harms the storyline to see the characters admit they're in a comic strip quite openly by discussing the author.
That said, the first two comics were pretty well done, so good job on those! :smallsmile:
Omega
2007-12-21, 09:56 AM
Thanks for all the support on this comic, but I'm not sad to say that I'm withdraw this comic... basically not updating it anymore. The reason: I'm too lazy. :smallsmile:
Mc. Lovin'
2007-12-29, 09:08 AM
I'd advise against 4th-wall breaking jokes this early in the strip.
Speaking of which how did the first page of your comic begin Z? :smallamused:
Speaking of which how did the first page of your comic begin Z? :smallamused:
Whereupon CorruptHardware helpfully pointed out that this is a bad idea, a tradition which I am now continuing here :smallsmile:
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