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Yeril
2008-01-25, 02:54 PM
When I saw that Almight salmon over at failing saves had tried a new type of style for drawing and re-did his first comic, I instantly fell in love with how he drew his kobolds. And as a tribute, I decided to make a quick one shot (Sorry folks who think Yeril is taking up making a web-comic) comic strip with a very similar style.

Just sharing with my friends at Arts and crafts.

http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q70/Yerileikre/Kobolds1.png


I know the joke is bad but me-no-good-at-writey-stuff :smallbiggrin:

Edit: Panel 3 is supposed to read "It's so boring! I mean all we do is stand around and watch humans walk into the traps. It's just so dull, where is the exitement?"

Squark
2008-01-25, 03:01 PM
Interesting

Keris
2008-01-25, 03:16 PM
Make more! You should do and entire webcomic of them! :smalltongue:

Yeril
2008-01-25, 03:21 PM
Make more! You should do and entire webcomic of them! :smalltongue:

I would but my litracy skills and script and joke writing capability is terrible. :smallsmile:

Moral Wiz
2008-01-25, 03:22 PM
Here here. If you're worried about joke skills, ask around for writers. There are plenty of them kicking around. It's a neat style, and it'd make a good regular comic.

Dallas-Dakota
2008-01-25, 03:22 PM
Get an script writer!

Blayze
2008-01-25, 03:58 PM
Writer here (And by that I mean "Someone who can't draw at all"). I've never written for someone else before, but I'll give it my best shot if you want me to.

Bayar
2008-01-25, 04:04 PM
hehe...it is suprisingly funny...and reminds me of Goblins (but that one sucked)

Squark
2008-01-25, 05:21 PM
Goblins? Bad? Where are you living?

Simius
2008-01-25, 05:33 PM
It's a cool style. I just think that you should change the shape of the eyes to show facial expressions. Just take a look at how the Giant uses Xykon's eyes to express emotions.

Parvum
2008-01-25, 05:46 PM
I would but my litracy skills and script and joke writing capability is terrible. :smallsmile:

Hire someone. Remind them that you don't not pay them to sit around lounging all day.

Bayar
2008-01-26, 03:29 AM
Goblins? Bad? Where are you living?

Romania...dunno, I just dont like how they are designed...I pictured goblins differently...I am not saying it is total crap...

JasonDoomsblade
2008-01-26, 07:39 AM
Funny.:smallbiggrin:

Szilard
2008-01-26, 11:46 AM
Cool. You could just make up the story as you go along.

Ichneumon
2008-01-26, 11:49 AM
I like it.

Squark
2008-01-26, 12:12 PM
Make more comics! Or We will.... Spam this thread!

Zombie pixe
2008-01-26, 12:52 PM
dont the kobolds remind you of kangaroos?

really like it :smallsmile:

yea, im sure there are plenty of writers around, jsut need to ask, you have one volenteir already :smallamused:

hes a vicious overlord at heart, but he means well

Yeril
2008-01-26, 01:11 PM
I decided to take Blayze up and we've been talking about it for abit (Im now working on #2)

Hopefuly it should be done by tommorow.

Dallas-Dakota
2008-01-26, 01:37 PM
Wooohoooz!

Blayze
2008-01-26, 02:12 PM
I'll do my best.