Comics! (Title Soon to come)

[Wreckingrocc]

Comic #1 is up! I will take recommendations for titles, because I can't think of one.

The Group: http://img503.imageshack.us/img503/8799/theteamsu2.png
Comic #1: Page 1: http://img187.imageshack.us/img187/9255/comic1iy3.png Comic #1: Page 2: http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/5238/comic2az6.pngComic #1, Page 3:http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/4605/comic3pz2.png

[Wreckingrocc]

Any Criticism, good or bad, would be appreciated.

Thanks :smallsmile:

[Phase]

First of all, I think you should put the picture of the characters in a spoiler, they strech the screen a lot.

Second, very funny. You look like you might be on the right path here...

[Zencao]

The only thing not good is some of the proportion and posing, alot of it just seems really unnatural and becomes quite off-putting. I'm sure that'll come with practice though :D

[Wreckingrocc]

K thanks.

I used paint :smallmad: for the first 5, then found inkscape, so that was my first comic.

[Wreckingrocc]

Comic 2 is up. Thanks for your suggestions, I took them into account, and I think it's a little better than the first one.

[Kurald Galain]

Two minor comments -

First, keep your file size down! Your images are about a megabyte in size, seven times larger than an OOTS image. It would be a good idea to reduce the resolution, and perhaps use GIF instead of PNG.

Second, use a spelling checker.

I'm afraid I can't say much about content yet with only two comics up, but good luck!

[The_Werebear]

Certainly looks interesting so far.

I'll stay tuned.

[Johnny Blade]

This looks pretty promising.

By the way, you might want to have it moved to the Arts & Crafts forum, since you would probably get more feedback there.

[Wreckingrocc]

Johnny Blade, I was just gonna ask if I should. I'll move it tomorrow night; I'm currently on vacation responding on my iPod (which does not have a copy/paste function).