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Omega
2008-03-30, 05:31 PM
Fitz's Adventures

I decided to make a interactive story, about a stick figure(Fitz) using Paint.NET (now being made in Inkscape... why? I have templates there! :smallbiggrin:). Post comments about what you think is going to happen next and it might just happen.

Stories

Book 1

Page 1
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Page 2
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Page 3
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Page 4
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Page 5
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Page 6
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Page 7
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Page 8a
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Page 8b
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Page 9a
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Page 9b
http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m241/jasonphantom/deathofmechafox.png
Page 10a
http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m241/jasonphantom/stickup.png
Page 10b
http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m241/jasonphantom/vampiremummybarber.png
Page 11
http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m241/jasonphantom/mechafoxrules.png
End of Book 1


Book 2

Page 1
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Page 2
Meanwhile at the bank...
http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m241/jasonphantom/newteamup.png
Page 3
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Page 4
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Page 5a
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Page 5b
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Character Biographies

Fitz
http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m241/jasonphantom/fitz.png
The main character of the adventure. His life is controlled by unknown forces.

http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m241/jasonphantom/fitzguard.png
Guard Fitz - He was working as a guard in a bank, guarding 1 Million dollars. Then he unleashed his Chicken, Clucky onto a bank robber.

**http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m241/jasonphantom/fitzguard-1.png

**Newest picture


Barber Bob

http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m241/jasonphantom/barberbob.png
Before death - He tried to get Fitz to buy one of his haircuts, but died from starvation.

http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m241/jasonphantom/vampirebarberbob.png
Vampire Bob - Returned from dead, shot Fitz in the left foot and gave him a band-aid; that Fitz killed him with.

http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m241/jasonphantom/vampiremummybarberbobpng.png
Vampire Mummy Bob - Returned again from the grave and is trying to make an Unholy Alliance, to get back at Fitz for killing him.

**http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m241/jasonphantom/vampiremummybarberbobpng-1.png

**Newest picture


Q

http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m241/jasonphantom/stickq.png
Q - After meeting up with Fitz, Fitz stole his bike and rode of with it. He later faked his death after claiming to not being able to live without his bike.
**http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m241/jasonphantom/q-1.png

**Newest picture

Mechafox

http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m241/jasonphantom/mechafox.png
Dead Mechafox - Was slaughtered by with the bike the Fitz stole from Q.

http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m241/jasonphantom/vampiremechafox.png
Vampire Mechafox - With some cheezy Dark Arts line from Vampire Mummy Barber Bob, Mechafox is revived as a vampire with a full body!

**http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m241/jasonphantom/vampiremummybarberbobpng-1.png

**Newest picture


Bank Robber
http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m241/jasonphantom/bankrobber.png
Bank Robber - He first appeared in the bank where Fitz is working at as a bank guard. He fought against Fitz's pokemon-- Cluck!

~Newest picture under construction~ :smallsmile:


http://i25.tinypic.com/2i6nrlz.png - This comic is approved by The_Q

BRC
2008-03-30, 05:32 PM
Copycat

Whoo hidden text!

Szilard
2008-03-30, 05:42 PM
Barber cuts his head off.

TheCountAlucard
2008-03-30, 05:45 PM
Fitz grows a moustache!

Phase
2008-03-30, 05:49 PM
The barber realizes that no one actually has hair and dies of his previously unrealized hunger...

Green-Shirt Q
2008-03-30, 05:49 PM
Fitz is run over by a motorcycle (driven by me) and has a near-death expirence causeing him to turn his life around and do good things (he was a criminal before this happened.)

smart thog
2008-03-30, 06:08 PM
Fitz is run over by a motorcycle (driven by me) and has a near-death expirence causeing him to turn his life around and do good things (he was a criminal before this happened.)

You watch My Name is Earl much?

Phase
2008-03-30, 06:15 PM
Fitz is run over by a motorcycle (driven by me) and has a near-death expirence causeing him to turn his life around and do good things (he was a criminal before this happened.)

Too "My name is Earl"...

Ninja'd!

For the first time!

Green-Shirt Q
2008-03-30, 06:25 PM
I didn't think anybody here watched that show except me, (When I refrenced it in my comic, nobody got it).

Well, he should definetly get run-over by a motorcylce driven by me.

Omega
2008-03-30, 07:51 PM
The barber realizes that no one actually has hair and dies of his previously unrealized hunger...
W00T REPLIES!
Alright!

Page 2
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Didn't get the punchline? Neither did I.

Phase
2008-03-30, 08:05 PM
Wierd, I laughed and I didn't know why...

It's funny

Wbshzahh?

HLokbed'td Hubdp?

Kjie!

XenoTherapy
2008-03-30, 08:07 PM
Heh... reminds me of the interactive stories over at Explosm...without the retarded perversion, of course (thank god.)

My idea: Check the wallet. Might be something useful in there.

yoshi927
2008-03-30, 08:32 PM
Loot the barber, I say!

Jerukal
2008-03-30, 08:32 PM
they use magic and asplode! ^_^

TheCountAlucard
2008-03-30, 08:33 PM
...without the retarded perversion, of course.

FAP!

I mean, uhh, flashback to the training of bees!

smart thog
2008-03-30, 08:41 PM
I didn't think anybody here watched that show except me, (When I refrenced it in my comic, nobody got it).

Well, he should definetly get run-over by a motorcylce driven by me.

I've never read your comic for two reasons.

One, it doesn't show up on my craptop.
Two, how can you trust a webcomic, if the author has not made their own avatar? I mean, Zarah does it, and so does omega. It kinda makes you seem bad at Oots artwork (which I doubt is the case), no offense

BRC
2008-03-30, 08:42 PM
I've never read your comic for two reasons.

One, it doesn't show up on my craptop.
Two, how can you trust a webcomic, if the author has not made their own avatar? I mean, Zarah does it, and so does omega. It kinda makes you seem bad at Oots artwork (which I doubt is the case), no offense
Speaking as a Webcomicist who did not make their own avatar, I would like to say that I am using this one because it is an Erfatar, which I cannot do, and because it is awsome incarnate.

Also, the voices in my head told me to use it, and they are always right.

someonenonotyou
2008-03-30, 09:12 PM
loot the barber then do the chicken dance
i dont know why i felt like it:smallbiggrin:

TheCountAlucard
2008-03-30, 09:43 PM
So, you gonna add page 2 to the top, Omega?

(casually hefting a giant, rusty pipe wrench while waiting for an answer)

Bayar
2008-03-31, 02:07 AM
I've never read your comic for two reasons.

One, it doesn't show up on my craptop.
Two, how can you trust a webcomic, if the author has not made their own avatar? I mean, Zarah does it, and so does omega. It kinda makes you seem bad at Oots artwork (which I doubt is the case), no offense

I can make my own avatars, but sometimes I enjoy someone else draw it for me. Just because it is always nice to switch art styles. And have a big and diverse avatar pool.

Omega
2008-03-31, 03:02 PM
So, you gonna add page 2 to the top, Omega?

(casually hefting a giant, rusty pipe wrench while waiting for an answer)

Done.



I've never read your comic for two reasons.

One, it doesn't show up on my craptop.
Two, how can you trust a webcomic, if the author has not made their own avatar? I mean, Zarah does it, and so does omega. It kinda makes you seem bad at Oots artwork (which I doubt is the case), no offense


Truth is, like I stated a while back, I like to use my style only. For the fact is that my style is original and like none before me. Even if the style is crap-in-a-bucket, it is still my style. :biggrin:



Loot the barber, I say!


Done!
Page 3

http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m241/jasonphantom/FitzsAdventurespg3.png


Tried of all the spoilers? So am I. :annoyed: :wink:

Phase
2008-03-31, 03:45 PM
Go to the lab and splice your chicken with a koala!

TheCountAlucard
2008-03-31, 04:34 PM
Teach the chicken to eat beef!

XenoTherapy
2008-03-31, 04:38 PM
Fight some pokemans and level up your chicken so he evolves!

Lyinginbedmon
2008-03-31, 04:48 PM
Throw the chicken at some small children

Green-Shirt Q
2008-04-02, 02:43 PM
Fitz's doodles come to life and go on a killing spree, and I come in on a motorcycle to join them.

JasonDoomsblade
2008-04-02, 04:35 PM
The Barber comes back to life as a Vampire, with Ace Ventura hair and shoots Fitz in the foot. But then the Sun comes out and he dissolves. :smallbiggrin:

TheCountAlucard
2008-04-02, 04:37 PM
Teach the chicken to eat beef!

Phase
2008-04-02, 09:49 PM
Give the kid the chicken!

Omega
2008-04-04, 05:49 PM
The Barber comes back to life as a Vampire, with Ace Ventura hair and shoots Fitz in the foot. But then the Sun comes out and he dissolves. :smallbiggrin:

Done, but there is no sun! :smalltongue:
Page 5
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Green-Shirt Q
2008-04-05, 08:22 AM
I come in on a motorcycle and-

(everyone else): Stop with the Motorcyce! He's not going to do it!:smallmad:

(me): Fine! Yet me think of something else, then.

......................
Okay, I think I got it!
The vampire barber gives the band-aid to Fitz, but Fitz uses the band-aid to strangle the undead, hair-cutting abomination instead of stopping the bleeding of his foot, thus causing him to become woozy. Comedy follows.

Lyinginbedmon
2008-04-05, 08:39 AM
Blood loss and Vampire.

Go.

Omega
2008-04-05, 10:40 PM
I come in on a motorcycle and-

(everyone else): Stop with the Motorcyce! He's not going to do it!:smallmad:

(me): Fine! Yet me think of something else, then.

......................
Okay, I think I got it!
The vampire barber gives the band-aid to Fitz, but Fitz uses the band-aid to strangle the undead, hair-cutting abomination instead of stopping the bleeding of his foot, thus causing him to become woozy. Comedy follows.

Page 6 up!
http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m241/jasonphantom/pg6.png

Green-Shirt Q
2008-04-06, 09:05 AM
Cool! You did my idea!

My other idea albiet. But still an idea!

My next suggestion: Fitz goes to a high-class party and offends everyone (he's still in a near-drunk state due to his blood-loss.)

XenoTherapy
2008-04-06, 10:33 AM
Steal Q's motorcycle, Fitz!

Do it! Dooo it!

Omega
2008-04-11, 10:18 PM
Steal Q's motorcycle, Fitz!

Do it! Dooo it!

EDIT: My mistake; I meant to do both, but didn't.
Page 7
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Green-Shirt Q
2008-04-12, 06:51 AM
:smallannoyed:

Whatever.

Fitz crashes because he was gloating instead of watching the road.

P.S: I think you might have used the exact same Clip-art as me, only not modify it slightly.

Fawkes
2008-04-15, 09:06 PM
Q is so distraught by the loss of his bike that he kills himself.

Omega
2008-04-19, 02:38 PM
Fitz crashes because he was gloating instead of watching the road.

http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m241/jasonphantom/crash.png


Q is so distraught by the loss of his bike that he kills himself.

http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m241/jasonphantom/deathofq.png

Green-Shirt Q
2008-04-19, 04:09 PM
:smallannoyed: I wouldn't kill myself over that. I couldn't (I'm immortal).

My newest suggestion: I come out fine and unharmed and say "Naw, just kidding. Can you imagin if I was actually like that?" or something along those lines.

Fitz crashes into Mechafox and kills him.

MrEdwardNigma
2008-04-19, 04:15 PM
The_Q comes back as a vampire.

The barber vampire turns into a vampire-mummy(-barber), because of all of the bandaids all over him.

They form an unholy alliance and swear to kill Fitz.

Fawkes
2008-04-19, 11:35 PM
Fitz's bike crashes into a marshmallow truck, and Fitz lands on a pile of marshmallows.

MrEdwardNigma
2008-04-20, 03:35 AM
Here's my analysis of the webcomic (Sort of). Feel free to ignore.

Drawing style: 3
Humour: 8
Originality: 5
Plot: 0

Lyinginbedmon
2008-04-20, 04:02 AM
Here's my analysis of the webcomic (Sort of). Feel free to ignore.

Drawing style: 3
Humour: 8
Originality: 5
Plot: 0

This is about par for the course of an interactive comic.

Omega
2008-04-20, 05:30 PM
My newest suggestion: I come out fine and unharmed and say "Naw, just kidding. Can you imagin if I was actually like that?" or something along those lines.

Fitz crashes into Mechafox and kills him.

Return of Q
http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m241/jasonphantom/qreturns.png

Death of Mechafox
http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m241/jasonphantom/deathofmechafox.png

MrEdwardNigma
2008-04-20, 05:37 PM
Nooooooo, not Mechafox! Anyone but Mechafox! Take me instead!

Now have him come back as a vampire and swear an unholy alliance against Fitz with the mummy-vampire-barber.

Green-Shirt Q
2008-04-20, 05:38 PM
Good comic!

New suggestion: Fitz gets a job at a bank (he said he needed a job, right?) and there is a hold-up (as in there is an armed robbery, not a long line.)

Fitz unleashes his chicken onto them for a neat fight scene while cowerdly Fitz walks away.

MrEdwardNigma
2008-04-20, 05:41 PM
Good comic!

New suggestion: Fitz gets a job at a bank (he said he needed a job, right?) and there is a hold-up (as in there is an armed robbery, not a long line.)

Fitz unleashes his chicken onto them for a neat fight scene while cowerdly Fitz walks away.

An armed robbery by Mechafox vampire and mummy-vampire-barber?
I guess the scissors could count as arms, right?

Fawkes
2008-04-21, 12:22 AM
But... but... robot...

Omega
2008-04-21, 05:53 AM
New suggestion: Fitz gets a job at a bank (he said he needed a job, right?) and there is a hold-up (as in there is an armed robbery, not a long line.)

Fitz unleashes his chicken onto them for a neat fight scene while cowerdly Fitz walks away.

Stick Up (no pun intended)!
http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m241/jasonphantom/stickup.png


An armed robbery by Mechafox vampire and mummy-vampire-barber?
I guess the scissors could count as arms, right?

Return of Vampire Mummy Barber!
http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m241/jasonphantom/vampiremummybarber.png

MrEdwardNigma
2008-04-21, 02:28 PM
Unholy alliance with Mechafox vampire, bank robber and vampire-mummy-barber?

Omega
2008-04-21, 04:36 PM
New update: Character Bios!

Fitz
http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m241/jasonphantom/fitz.png
The main character of the adventure. His life is controlled by unknown forces.

http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m241/jasonphantom/fitzguard.png
Guard Fitz - He was working as a guard in a bank, guarding 1 Million dollars. Then he unleashed his Chicken, Clucky onto a bank robber.

Barber Bob

http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m241/jasonphantom/barberbob.png
Before death - He tried to get Fitz to buy one of his haircuts, but died from starvation.

http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m241/jasonphantom/vampirebarberbob.png
Vampire Bob - Returned from dead, shot Fitz in the left foot and gave him a band-aid; that Fitz killed him with.

http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m241/jasonphantom/vampiremummybarberbobpng.png
Vampire Mummy Bob - Returned again from the grave and is trying to make an Unholy Alliance, to get back at Fitz for killing him.


Q

http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m241/jasonphantom/stickq.png
Q - After meeting up with Fitz, Fitz stole his bike and rode of with it. He later faked his death after claiming to not being able to live without his bike.

Mechafox

http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m241/jasonphantom/mechafox.png
Dead Mechafox - Was slaughtered by with the bike the Fitz stole from Q.

http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m241/jasonphantom/vampiremechafox.png
Vampire Mechafox - With some cheezy Dark Arts line from Vampire Mummy Barber Bob, Mechafox his revived as a vampire with a full body!


Bank Robber
http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m241/jasonphantom/bankrobber.png
Bank Robber - He first appeared in the bank where Fitz is working at as a bank guard. He fought against Fitz's pokemon-- Cluck!

Also, new comic!

Mechafox returns!
http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m241/jasonphantom/mechafoxrules.png

MrEdwardNigma
2008-04-21, 06:01 PM
Aaaaaaand we have plot! Awesome.

Character bios too? Great, that means the vampires aren't one shot characters anymore...

Omega
2008-04-21, 07:48 PM
Thanks, I try.

Yeah!

Fawkes
2008-04-21, 08:46 PM
Mechafox contemplates the paradox of a robot head dying, bleeding, becoming a vampire, and spontaneously sprouting a body. Then he gets drunk.

MrEdwardNigma
2008-04-22, 01:46 AM
I have to say, Mechafox looks pretty cool as a vampire. It's probably the monocle.

I say the bank robber should kill the chicken and eat it deepfried. KFC!

Omega
2008-04-27, 03:03 PM
Mechafox contemplates the paradox of a robot head dying, bleeding, becoming a vampire, and spontaneously sprouting a body. Then he gets drunk.

http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m241/jasonphantom/gettingdrunk.png

MrEdwardNigma
2008-04-27, 04:18 PM
Finally this thing is moving on!
All right, how about Q goes to collect his life insurance for "dying"?
Or Bob or Mechafox could do that as well, I suppose.

Better yet!
They all do it!

Better yet, they all go to the same place to collect, and meet each other!

Better yet, they go to the bank where the bank robber is fighting the chicken to collect insurance, and every single character but Fitz meets!

I suppose Fitz could try to get te police to save his chicken in the mean time or something... Who cares about Fitz anyways? :smalltongue:

I suppose Fitz's actions could lead to the police surrounding the bank, resulting in some kind of hostage situation. Who will take who hostage is still unclear to me. I'm rather certain the chicken won't be the hostage taker though.

Feel free to use whichever bits you find usefull (or none, that's fine too).

Green-Shirt Q
2008-05-03, 01:59 PM
Hey Omega. I have no suggestions for what to do in the next comic, sorry, but here is something you might want to add to the first post.

http://i25.tinypic.com/2i6nrlz.png

XenoTherapy
2008-05-05, 07:29 AM
The Interactivity thread is so jealous, now!

You made it cry, the_Q!

Green-Shirt Q
2008-05-05, 02:03 PM
I've got it! A suggestion for what happens next! Finally!

The chicken fights the robbers but the robbers convince the chicken that he is a slave to Fitz. The chicken hasn't thought about it before but know has realized that Fitz put him into a tiny pokeball (which are very uncomfortable) and forced him to fight armed robbers while Fitz cowerdly walks away.

The chicken is vengeful now, and teams up with the robbers to kill Fitz.

Now there are two teams after Fitz, and Fitz must hire a bodyguard (who is somebody in the audience)

P.S:

The Interactivity thread is so jealous, now!

You made it cry, the_Q!

And who's fault is that! To get a seal of approval you must have me in your comic as a recurring character just like Fitz's adventures, Halo:Project classifeid and Well that was unexpected.

But in order to get the seal you must have me in the comic for more then three issuses and ad least two issuse after that. And I have to like the cameo I've been given.

Sorry, but untill that happens, no seal for you!

Omega
2008-05-10, 04:05 PM
I've got it! A suggestion for what happens next! Finally!

The chicken fights the robbers but the robbers convince the chicken that he is a slave to Fitz. The chicken hasn't thought about it before but know has realized that Fitz put him into a tiny pokeball (which are very uncomfortable) and forced him to fight armed robbers while Fitz cowerdly walks away.

The chicken is vengeful now, and teams up with the robbers to kill Fitz.

Now there are two teams after Fitz, *and Fitz must hire a bodyguard (who is somebody in the audience)*

Book 2, Page 2 up and running!
http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m241/jasonphantom/newteamup.png

*Note: I'll do that part in the next comic*

MrEdwardNigma
2008-05-11, 02:37 PM
I suggest either team that wants to kill Fitz builds an over elaborate death trap for him.

I also think the chicken should get a character bio.

And perhaps we could bring back The_Q as Fitz's last resort for help?

Omega
2008-05-24, 01:10 PM
Page 3!
http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m241/jasonphantom/teamingupandmakingplans.png

Chicken's Bio
http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m241/jasonphantom/fitzschicken.png
Chicken - After being left behind, by Fitz to fight the Bank Robber. He is talked into teaming up with him so that they can take out their revenge on Fitz. He is currently in the team: The Chicken Strikes Back!

MrEdwardNigma
2008-05-29, 01:25 PM
My god... Those plans are indescribably cunning!
Yes!
Brilliant!

Now, something should go wrong for general comedy...
The two plans should somehow interfere with each other, and then someone should get caught in the pokéball (though not the chicken, off course. Where's the comedy in that?). Oh, and something bad should happen to the Q. Something dreadful.

Anyone else got some ideas?

MrEdwardNigma
2008-07-10, 07:56 AM
Sooooooo, is this dead, Omega?

Omega
2008-07-27, 02:17 AM
http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m241/jasonphantom/saved.png

MrEdwardNigma
2008-07-27, 08:25 AM
Oooooh, great. The final showdown!

And it seems quality has increased, even though they're still, you know, generic stick figures :smalltongue:

Omega
2008-07-27, 01:14 PM
And it seems quality has increased, even though they're still, you know, generic stick figures :smalltongue:

Yes, yes... generic stick figures! MUWAHAHAHA! :smallamused:

:smalleek:

But, I like to add some detail to my stick figures, not just make them plain. :smallbiggrin:

MrEdwardNigma
2008-07-28, 05:03 PM
Alright. Suggestions for what should happen next?
Gigantic battle. Quite possibly a confusing one too. Someone ends up caught in the pokéball, someone gets shot and someone gets put on fire for some reason.
Massive chaos.

And off course, hilarity ensues.

You forgot to update the first page, by the way.

Omega
2008-07-30, 05:43 PM
Pg 3 up and running! :smallbiggrin:
http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m241/jasonphantom/pg14.png

Szilard
2008-08-01, 10:54 AM
But the hair cutting guy escaped!:smalleek:

MrEdwardNigma
2008-08-01, 12:50 PM
But the hair cutting guy escaped!:smalleek:
I'm pretty sure he's in the pokéball.

Omega
2008-08-02, 04:07 PM
But the hair cutting guy escaped!:smalleek:

I'm pretty sure he's in the pokéball.

You guessed correctly! :smallbiggrin:

Also, Szilard, I didn't know you read these? :smallconfused:

Green-Shirt Q
2008-08-02, 04:19 PM
I suggest a supervillian comes (of your creation of course, but if you can't think of a good one I'll be happy to help out) and sets a doomsday device underground where Fitz and I are currently, and we have to escape.

The badguys, having only been faking death, also escape, planning to return and kill Fitz when the time is better.

Also, I ask Fitz for some money because me body guarding him for free is SO out of character for me.

Also, have my green-shirted sidekick come along, since he is basically with me at all times. If you don't know who I'm talking about, read "My Name Is Q". (Yeah, this is an adverising scheme.)

Omega
2008-08-02, 04:36 PM
Also, have my green-shirted sidekick come along, since he is basically with me at all times. If you don't know who I'm talking about, read "My Name Is Q". (Yeah, this is an adverising scheme.)

I am guessing your talking about Q? :smalltongue:

Green-Shirt Q
2008-08-02, 04:49 PM
I am guessing your talking about Q? :smalltongue:

Yes. Make sure to draw him with his green and blue pointy-shoulder shirt. And if it isn't too much to ask, please draw me with my Star Trek shirt.

MrEdwardNigma
2008-08-02, 05:34 PM
I can see Q asking for money, and perhaps his sidekick coming along (as cannonfodder, please), but the whole villain thing? Nah.

The bank robber is still alive, though he'll need some kind of wheelchair, the barber is in the pokéball (alive as well, as the pokéball is moving) and Mechafox has shown us he can survive without a head before. I think we have enough villains for now. The only one I predict won't be getting up is the chicken. This might be the time for some kentucky fried chicken and some KFC jokes.

Szilard
2008-08-03, 04:52 PM
You guessed correctly! :smallbiggrin:

Also, Szilard, I didn't know you read these? :smallconfused:

I read pretty much every comic on these forums.

Omega
2008-08-03, 04:57 PM
I read pretty much every comic on these forums.

*holds back tears of joy* I... promised myself I wouldn't cry! :smallfrown: :smallsmile:

MrEdwardNigma
2008-08-05, 12:14 PM
As for what happens next, with all these enemies he's making Fritz might want to take the robber's gun to defend himself, while the Q might want to take the "pokémon", as he's in dire need of a sidekick, apparently.

Green-Shirt Q
2008-08-05, 02:50 PM
I already HAVE a sidekick.

MrEdwardNigma
2008-08-06, 01:27 PM
I already HAVE a sidekick.

Not canonically you don't.

Green-Shirt Q
2008-08-06, 01:35 PM
Not canonically you don't.

Sure I do! He might not have made his apperence yet, but I'm sure Omega will bring him into the show somehow (PLEASE NOT as cannon fodder!)

Omega
2008-08-06, 03:53 PM
Sure I do! He might not have made his apperence yet, but I'm sure Omega will bring him into the show somehow (PLEASE NOT as cannon fodder!)

I'm sorry to say, but unless you can give me a solid reason why I need to use Q in the plot (instead of cannon food [aka cannon fodder]) then let me know. :smallsmile:

Green-Shirt Q
2008-08-06, 04:12 PM
I'm sorry to say, but unless you can give me a solid reason why I need to use Q in the plot (instead of cannon food [aka cannon fodder]) then let me know. :smallsmile:

Well for one, it dosen't make any sense if I am and he isn't!

In the story of "My Name is Q", I am known for commiting many crimes and causing choas thoughout the universe. For my crimes, I was given a chaperone. Somebody to watch over me and (unsuccessfully) make sure I do not cause any more crimes. If I leave him, I would vanish instantly. I do suggest, for the sake of good continuity, that he show up. I do not, however, think you HAVE to bring him in. You could always say that this is BEFORE I needed a chaperone if you do not decide to bring him in, but if that were the case, it would probably be a good idea to have me play several deadly pranks on Fitz, mainly because generosity is SO out of character.

Also, plot?

Omega
2008-08-06, 04:36 PM
Well for one, it dosen't make any sense if I am and he isn't!

In the story of "My Name is Q", I am known for commiting many crimes and causing choas thoughout the universe. For my crimes, I was given a chaperone. Somebody to watch over me and (unsuccessfully) make sure I do not cause any more crimes. If I leave him, I would vanish instantly. I do suggest, for the sake of good continuity, that he show up. I do not, however, think you HAVE to bring him in. You could always say that this is BEFORE I needed a chaperone if you do not decide to bring him in, but if that were the case, it would probably be a good idea to have me play several deadly pranks on Fitz, mainly because generosity is SO out of character.

Also, plot?

Makes sense (since I have read the first 3 or 5 comics), I'll bring him in the next comic, but in an unexpected role. :smallamused:

Yes a plot, which is made by the viewers and I put it together (which I need to work on, blasted school! :smallannoyed:)

Omega
2008-08-09, 10:09 PM
Alright, since the next comic will be longer than usual I'll give a tiny preview!
http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m241/jasonphantom/preview0001.png

MrEdwardNigma
2008-08-13, 01:43 PM
An actual plot that isn't just scraps suggested by readers put together?

Le Gasp!:smalltongue:

Omega
2008-08-13, 06:28 PM
An actual plot that isn't just scraps suggested by readers put together?

Le Gasp!:smalltongue:

Yes and no. I decided to add some of my own ideas into this new upcoming comic. :smallwink:

MrEdwardNigma
2008-08-14, 11:36 AM
Yes and no. I decided to add some of my own ideas into this new upcoming comic. :smallwink:

Great. Just don't forget to shove in some explosions somewhere, and it'll be fine.

Omega
2008-08-24, 07:08 PM
Here we go!

Warning LARGE comic! WILL strech your browser, 'cause it did the same to mine.
http://img50.imageshack.us/img50/1149/akwardsn7.png

Green-Shirt Q
2008-08-24, 07:45 PM
........................................madness.

Omega
2008-08-24, 11:03 PM
........................................madness.

Response to ^:
I'll bring him in the next comic, but in an unexpected role. :smallamused:

And I did just that! :smallwink: :smalltongue:

MrEdwardNigma
2008-09-01, 09:45 AM
You did fine with the explosions, I guess, but that was just werid!

Omega
2008-09-01, 07:12 PM
You did fine with the explosions, I guess, but that was just werid!

It's what I dooo! :smallwink: :smallbiggrin: