Beguiling Curse(OOTS-styled webcomic)

[Jerukal]

I was playing a campaign with my friend and I was a beguiler with a DMPC companion who was a pessimistic hexblade. Here is my comic, please tell me how it looks(flame if you want).
The Beguiling Curse

Characters

http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j33/0_todd_0/Beguiling%20Curse/JerukalTrinkstire.png
Name: Jerukal Trinkstire
Race: Human
Class: Beguiler
Personality: Sortof stupid but watches out for Kelen

http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j33/0_todd_0/Beguiling%20Curse/KelenTropore2.png
Name: Kelen Tropore
Race: Illumian(Races of Destiny)
Class: Hexblade
Personality: Pessimistic, she speaks in a quiet voice, but loves to brag about her abilities.

Comics
http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j33/0_todd_0/Beguiling%20Curse/Ch1trapped.png
Comic 1: Arrow Through the Chest
http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j33/0_todd_0/Beguiling%20Curse/BC01fix.png

[TheCountAlucard]

Intriguing. Hmm...

[Phase]

Hmmm... Yes... quite...

[someonenonotyou]

hmm... could be intersing

[Green-Shirt Q]

I agree. Although, I don't know if this is intentional, but the font is far too small for me to read sometimes.

[Sneak]

Yeah, I think the whole comic is smaller than it's supposed to be.

Anyway, this is interesting.

[Wreckingrocc]

Did one of them just die in the first page?

[Szilard]

No, their eyes are just closed.

[Lyinginbedmon]

No more of this? :smallfrown:

[Nameless]

This looks quite good. :smalltongue: