Gael_Judicium
2008-06-22, 10:13 PM
There was a post a while back about this that got lost somewhere in the clutter here. I've been on vacation and I now need continually readers.
Okay then, I'm going to give everyone here a part of my story. The sole purpose of this is to attract (read bribe) people to my site. Yes, I know, I'm telling you flat out. This was originally slated to be #7 in the Gael Storyline. However, I am deviating from that plan. Since the attackers name has not yet been revealed in my story, there shouldn't be any big spoilers, but I'm going to put everything in spoiler tags. If you like this, come visit my site and read the rest! The link is below. I'm going to be adding #5 to the Gael Story as soon as I'm done typing this.
WARNING: There are some minor spoilers contained here and I haven't done my usual intensive proofreading. This is also very violent and graphic.
www.freewebs.com/etheriaproject
The blood stained the front of his uniform red. As life slipped away, the knife was pulled out his heart, causing more blood to spurt out. The other soldiers began to react, but it was too late. The attacker immediately shoved the still standing corpse into the captain, sending both bodies down in a heap. The attacker spun around, the blade of the knife slicing through the neck of the next soldier, nearly completely severing the head from the body. Blood spurted out of the severed arteries as the body collapsed.
By this time the soldier had drawn her sword and the captain managed to push the body off of him and stand up, spear ready. Blood ran down his face as he stood panting, black eyes filled with room left only left for hate. The remaining soldier looked at the cloaked attack warily as sweat ran down her face. With a roar, the huge captain charged him with his spear. The other solider lunged at the attacker as well from his opposite side. The attacker seemed to pause as they lunged, and then, at the last second, he sprang backwards. Inches away, there was no way for them to avoid impaling the other. The four bodies lay on the now bold-stained ground.
Okay then, I'm going to give everyone here a part of my story. The sole purpose of this is to attract (read bribe) people to my site. Yes, I know, I'm telling you flat out. This was originally slated to be #7 in the Gael Storyline. However, I am deviating from that plan. Since the attackers name has not yet been revealed in my story, there shouldn't be any big spoilers, but I'm going to put everything in spoiler tags. If you like this, come visit my site and read the rest! The link is below. I'm going to be adding #5 to the Gael Story as soon as I'm done typing this.
WARNING: There are some minor spoilers contained here and I haven't done my usual intensive proofreading. This is also very violent and graphic.
www.freewebs.com/etheriaproject
The blood stained the front of his uniform red. As life slipped away, the knife was pulled out his heart, causing more blood to spurt out. The other soldiers began to react, but it was too late. The attacker immediately shoved the still standing corpse into the captain, sending both bodies down in a heap. The attacker spun around, the blade of the knife slicing through the neck of the next soldier, nearly completely severing the head from the body. Blood spurted out of the severed arteries as the body collapsed.
By this time the soldier had drawn her sword and the captain managed to push the body off of him and stand up, spear ready. Blood ran down his face as he stood panting, black eyes filled with room left only left for hate. The remaining soldier looked at the cloaked attack warily as sweat ran down her face. With a roar, the huge captain charged him with his spear. The other solider lunged at the attacker as well from his opposite side. The attacker seemed to pause as they lunged, and then, at the last second, he sprang backwards. Inches away, there was no way for them to avoid impaling the other. The four bodies lay on the now bold-stained ground.