PDA

View Full Version : Sunset Grill



katastrophe
2008-09-28, 10:36 PM
Hey all, I'm a longtime reader who only just thought to mosey on over to the Forum link. You mean there's people over here? Who knew?

At any rate, I thought a few of you might be interested in my webcomic: Sunset Grill (http://www.sunsetgrillcomic.com), a futuristic comic of crime, poverty, and really serious drinking. It's only just getting started, but pop around anyhow and tell me what you think. I like opinions. No, really. ;)


http://www.sunsetgrillcomic.com/gfx/BannerLTM.jpg (http://www.sunsetgrillcomic.com)

PhantomFox
2008-09-28, 11:13 PM
Well, it's all right. Not bad, but not great either. Can't complain with the art, since it looks lifted out of some game. It's a bit confusing, with several story arcs running in different directions right now. Humor is a bit bland, but I don't think you're going for comedy right now. Once you get things headed in a coherent direction I'll get interested. You have good beginnings, they just need to develop before they get interesting.

katastrophe
2008-09-29, 10:07 PM
Fair enough. I've been worrying lately that the thing is going in too many directions. I *guess* it's nice to be right. *wry grin*

The art's not from a game, it's what's usually called Poser comics. My own artistic skills don't even approach the amusingly bad, so I went a different route. Most people seem to be finding it palatable, which is a relief.

Thanks again for the read and the post!