Dawn of Yesterday (An ABR Backstory)

[Fay Graydon]

Dawn of Yesterday
The Last Aether

Newest Comic:
http://orig06.deviantart.net/87b9/f/2016/119/7/9/doy_tla_4_by_xxpixiewolfxx-da0nas0.png
Archive
#1http://pre03.deviantart.net/4296/th/pre/i/2016/090/b/a/doy_tla_1_by_xxpixiewolfxx-d9x5pu0.png
#2http://orig06.deviantart.net/e70c/f/2016/091/8/9/doy_tla_2_by_xxpixiewolfxx-d9xaehy.png
#3http://pre04.deviantart.net/ad6f/th/pre/f/2016/098/e/c/doy_tla_3_by_xxpixiewolfxx-d9y5ktd.png
#4http://orig06.deviantart.net/87b9/f/2016/119/7/9/doy_tla_4_by_xxpixiewolfxx-da0nas0.png
Old Archives
First Draft
Episode 1:
http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday/Comic1Part1.png
http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday/Comic1part2fix.png
http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday/Comic1part3.png
http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday/Comic1part4.png
http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday/Comic1Part5.png
http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday/Comic1Part6a.png
http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday/Comic1Part6b.png
http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday/Comic1Part7.png
http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday/Comic1Part8.png
Episode 2: http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday/Comic2part1.png
http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday/Comic2part2.png
http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday/Comic2Part3.png
http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday/Comic2part4.png
http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday/Comic2Part5.png
http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday/Comic2part6.png
http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday/Comic2part7.png
http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday/Comic2part8.png
Episode 3:http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday/Comic3part1.png
http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday/Comic3part2.png
http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday/comic3part3.png
http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday/Comic3part4.png
http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday/Comic3part5fix.png

Second Draft
Introduction:
http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday%20Reboot/Introduction.png
Episode 1: Shadowplay:
http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday%20Reboot/Shadowplay1.png
http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday%20Reboot/Shadowplay2.png
http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday%20Reboot/Shadowplay3.png
http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday%20Reboot/Shadowplay4.png
http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday%20Reboot/Shadowplay5.png
http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday%20Reboot/Shadowplay6.png
http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday%20Reboot/Shadowplay7.png
http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday%20Reboot/Shadowplay8.png
Episode 2: A Day in the Life:
http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday%20Reboot/ADayintheLife1.png
http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday%20Reboot/ADayintheLife2.png

[_Puppetmaster_]

I like the beginning. I wan't to see more.:smallbiggrin:

EDIT: Whoo! First reply!

[memnarch]

Have a nice trip; see you next fall. :smallbiggrin:

Cool blur effects by the way.

[Mad Mask]

Looking great ! I like the fact that you used a different perspective when the guy fell. May your comic will enjoy a lot of strips !

[Fay Graydon]

:smallbiggrin: Thank you for the kind words.
And I've made the comics first banner (I will make more at a later date)
http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday/PrismTechIndustiesBanner1.png

and remember...
Prism Tech Industries is here for you:smallwink:

[The Gremlin]

Not half bad. I can envision this lasting a while.

[Nameless]

You may of have completely ripped off The Matrix, but this is pretty damn awesome. :smallbiggrin:

[Fay Graydon]

You know Nameless, I never actually thort of the Matrix whilst doing this comic...
but now you mention it, I must admit there are quite a lot of similarities.....
ah well :smalltongue:

[Fay Graydon]

New comic:
http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday/Comic1part3.png

(sorry for any complications)
[hr]will except auditions for cameos (ABR people will have to PM me with an explanation of why they would be on another planet almost 2000 years before the events of FFF)

[memnarch]

Poor guy.

Also, Jumper seems to be quite calm regarding his back.

[Mad Mask]

You accept cameos ? Wonderful !

*sends PM*

[Nameless]

CAMEO FOR NAMELESS! CAMEO FOR NAMELESS!:smallbiggrin:

[_Puppetmaster_]

*Sends cameo PM*

[Threeshades]

Looks neat so far. But I disagree with the "whole episode in one spoiler"-layout. It will make it incredibly bothersome to read when you have to find where in that huge column of comic you left last time so you can go on reading. It's already becoming apparent with only the second strip. And it surely wont get any better with ten of them. So rather put sub-spoilers for each page into the episode spoiler.

[Fay Graydon]

I've just realised that no matter what I do, the third comic comes out wrong:smalleek:
In the last pannel it says:
"...I was going to send YOU help..."
when its actually meant to be:
"...I was going to send FOR help...":smallfrown:
This is what it's meant to look like:
COMIC (http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday/Comic1part3.png?t=1226780368)

[memnarch]

Um... which comic has "send you help"? I don't see it...

[Fay Graydon]

The one in the archive
:(
My laptop is not a happy laptop at the moment...
Ive just booted it up for the last 20 mins and got the BSOD ever 4 or 5 mins:smallannoyed:

EDIT:
@V
How very odd, because they all say "send you help" for me...
what does everyone else see them as?

[memnarch]

They all look the same to me; "Send for help".


What operating system do you use and what's the age of the machine? Do you do anything just before it BSoD?

[Fay Graydon]

new:
http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday/Comic1part4.png
http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday/Comic1Part5.png

[Vulion]

Coo', I like the sci-fi theme. Can't wait to see more.

Not to sound like a callous ass hole, but when exactly will my cameo be?:smallbiggrin::smallcool:

[Fay Graydon]

*Checks PM inbox*
you havnt sent me any information about your cameo...:smalltongue:

[Vulion]

*Checks PM inbox*
you havnt sent me any information about your cameo...:smalltongue:

...AMNESIA DUST!!!

*runs off*

[memnarch]

Grem's not gonna be happy... :biggrin: :cool: :biggrin:

[BRC]

oooh... Shiny Comic.

[Bayar]

That "to the hospital" banner should have http://geekhazard.com/awesome.gif expressions.

[The Gremlin]

Grem's not gonna be happy... :biggrin: :cool: :biggrin:
Nah, I think I can fit it in. Ovu Monobi has numerous resources, it wouldn't be that hard to send one of his followers to another world.

[Fay Graydon]

Yes it's that time of the week again!
Happy times!
Here's a new comic:smallbiggrin::
http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday/Comic1Part6a.png
http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday/Comic1Part6b.png

[memnarch]

Say, this looks similar to The Emperor's room in Star Wars. :smalltongue:


Predictions
Prediction; my cameo character will either; A) never be seen/heard of again, or B) end up dead. :smalltongue:

Another prediction; Aaron and Fayte will have multiple run-ins with this hunter android, each time worse than the last.

[Elrond]

I like it i like it alot

[Fay Graydon]

:smallfrown: sorry for missing not 1 but 2 updates.........
but I'll make it up to you guys tomorrow...
Ive been having a...... time... :smallamused:

[Fay Graydon]

Sorry its so late.... and sorry I only made one...
but here we are:

http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday/Comic1Part7.png

[memnarch]

Heh.

Is that an empty bed?

[Fay Graydon]

....yes:smallfrown:

[Tiffanie Lirle]

If I may offer a little criticism?

In the last panel, you could have moved their arms around or make them run around in panic or something.. It's just seems so awkward to see them screaming while standing completely still.

But for what it's worth, I knew that was a bed. <.<

[Green-Shirt Q]

I thought the guy with the white eyes was blind? How does he know the nurse was cute? :smallconfused:

Bet you didn't think anybody'd catch that, did you?!

[Szilard]

At 17 or 19 he got some weird magical eye things.

[Green-Shirt Q]

At 17 or 19 he got some weird magical eye things.

*reads archive again*

Whoops. I missed that.

[Vulion]

I guess this is the place for fanart.

Fayt:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v222/Li_Kenta/Faytbust.jpg

[Elrond]

OOOOO!!!! could i have a cameo could i could i?:smallsmile: ill give you a cookie
Ill PM you the info

By the way Vulion thats scethch is really good

[Fay Graydon]

I guess this is the place for fanart.

Fayte:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v222/Li_Kenta/Faytbust.jpg

*Squeals* ^-^
Is sooooo good!

and yes Fayte did get optical implants (sci-fi... gotta love it:smallbiggrin:)

[Elrond]

Waits for cameo:smalltongue::smallamused::smallsmile:

[Fay Graydon]

new comic:
http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday/Comic1Part8.png

[Szilard]

Ouch.:smalleek:

[Lyinginbedmon]

Not the cute nurse! :smalleek:

[Mad Mask]

Poor girl... :smallfrown:

[Reinholdt]

*sheds tears for the nurse*
Get that meanie who shot her! :smallyuk:

[memnarch]

That's not good!

[Bayar]

Lol. *head 'splody*

[Mad Mask]

Fayt certainly loves gore; he's one of the few OotS artist to include so much in his comics.

[Elrond]

I agreed mask but why fayt why i loved that nurse she was so cute cant wait to find out who did it though:smallsmile:

[Fay Graydon]

*sheds tears for the nurse*
Get that meanie who shot her! :smallyuk:

*salutes* will do :smallsmile:


Fayt certainly loves gore; he's one of the few OotS artist to include so much in his comics.

:smallbiggrin: why thank you


I agreed mask but why fayt why i loved that nurse she was so cute cant wait to find out who did it though:smallsmile:

why? cuz i can :smalltongue:

EDIT:
I might start the next comic now *strokes goatee*

[Elrond]

why? cuz i can :smalltongue:
Why but thats so mean and she was so cute


EDIT:
I might start the next comic now *strokes goatee*
But this parts good very good:smallamused:

[Fay Graydon]

Well I hope you all enjoyed the Pilot episode....
now, Episode 2:
http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday/Comic2part1.png

[hr]
EDIT:
well, I thought maybe it was time for a little contest :smallamused:
Basically your task is to do the following:
In every television show there is (usually) a start up sequence, I want you to either script one or make a comic with a theme song for Dawn of Yesterday:smallbiggrin:
I will judge them along with 2 other people (If you wish to be a judge then ask me, but if not then two of my real life friends will get the role).

The rules:
1) don't post it in the thread as people can look at your attempt and steal ideas,
2) if you choose to do a comic then make sure it is either 6 panels or a multiple thereof.
3) No stealing of my work :smallannoyed: It will mean automatic disqualification if you have obviously ripped off my artwork.
4) be creative, if you choose to make a baddy then i will attempt to include him/her in the comic at some point, but don't use this as a way to get yourself into my comic.
5) if you make up a song then please tell me the tune to which it goes, and make sure you include the song name and band in the PM if you use an existing song (I may not know the lyrics to everysong :smallsmile:)

thats all.
The closing date is January the 1st

[Green-Shirt Q]

<hr>
EDIT:
well, I thought maybe it was time for a little contest :smallamused:
Basically your task is to do the following:
In every television show there is (usually) a start up sequence, I want you to either script one or make a comic with a theme song for Dawn of Yesterday:smallbiggrin:
I will judge them along with 2 other people (If you wish to be a judge then ask me, but if not then two of my real life friends will get the role).

The rules:
1) don't post it in the thread as people can look at your attempt and steal ideas,
2) if you choose to do a comic then make sure it is either 6 panels or a multiple thereof.
3) No stealing of my work :smallannoyed: It will mean automatic disqualification if you have obviously ripped off my artwork.
4) be creative, if you choose to make a baddy then i will attempt to include him/her in the comic at some point, but don't use this as a way to get yourself into my comic.
5) if you make up a song then please tell me the tune to which it goes, and make sure you include the song name and band in the PM if you use an existing song (I may not know the lyrics to everysong :smallsmile:)

thats all.
The closing date is January the 1st


WHY DIDN'T I THINK OF THAT?! :smalleek:

[Fay Graydon]

WHY DIDN'T I THINK OF THAT?! :smalleek:

Because you comic isn't set out like a TV show:smalltongue:

[Bayar]

So we cant use your characters ? Even if we draw them ourselves ?

[Fay Graydon]

You can use my characters.
just as long as you don't copy them straight out of a comic.
They need to be drawn by you.

[Elrond]

I dont get it:smallconfused:

[Tiffanie Lirle]

I dont get it:smallconfused:

He's basically saying we can use his characters, as long as we don't directly cut them out of his comics and paste them into our thing.

If you drew your own version of them, then everything's ok.

I would love to try my hand at this. But sadly I've got 2 comics to finish, a script to write, and then I've got to work on a 3rd comic for Abr.

I sometimes feel that I need a easier hobby.. :smalltongue:

[Fay Graydon]

He's basically saying we can use his characters, as long as we don't directly cut them out of his comics and paste them into our thing.

If you drew your own version of them, then everything's ok.


exactly :smallbiggrin:



I would love to try my hand at this. But sadly I've got 2 comics to finish, a script to write, and then I've got to work on a 3rd comic for Abr.

I sometimes feel that I need a easier hobby.. :smalltongue:

Well you still have plenty of time :smallsmile: and if I only get like 1 or 2 entries then i'll probabbly extend it by a week or two :smallsmile:
(but I'd rather not)

[Fay Graydon]

>.>
<.<
>.>

heheh...erm, seeing as I've been busy helping put up Cashmass decorations...
I give you a filler:

FILLLAAHHHHH!
http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/PowerRangersCyberSquad.png

*hides*

[Mad Mask]

All hail the mighty Colour Swatches ! It makes otherwise identical character different !

[Fay Graydon]

Oh how true you are :smalltongue:

[Fay Graydon]

Sorry about missing a bunch of updates guys... so I hope this Mega comic makes up for it :smallbiggrin::

http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday/Comic2part2.pnghttp://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday/Comic2Part3.pnghttp://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday/Comic2part4.png

Hope people don't mind a little bit of Gore:smallbiggrin:

[Tiffanie Lirle]

Laughed pretty hard when Nameless popped in there. :smalltongue:

You'd think he'd be used to these sorts of things.

[dark-sage 95]

WHY FAYT?? WHY??
now that I have discovered this comic I will have to follow it too!!!

SO MANY GOOD COMICS SO LITTLE TIME!!!:smalleek:

[Elrond]

Hehe its funny coz there dead when will i see my character involved?:smallfrown:

[Fay Graydon]

@ Elrond:
wait your turn :smallannoyed: I have a list of people to get through and you will get your cameo in due time...
@ Everyone else... right... partially due to the fact I havnt done a comic... and partly due to the fact that i'm not sure where to take the story next...

Who would you guys like me to follow in a story arc now?
Fayte
Aaron
Zero (guy with shades)
Android
??? (Super secret may be awesome sub story arc group?)

[Shades of Gray]

Diskord

In all seriousness...

Diskord!

But if there is no Diskord allowed...

DISKORD!
or maybe Android

[Fay Graydon]

Diskord

In all seriousness...

Diskord!

But if there is no Diskord allowed...

DISKORD!
or maybe Android

*Facepalm* shush!
((*whispers*fool! I'm in the process of considering Diskord as a character... now that you have said about him im reconsidering taking him out from later episodes all together :smalltongue: :smallannoyed: :smallbiggrin: :smallannoyed:))

[memnarch]

Which ever option will be the most epic.

Then the ??? option.

[Elrond]

I like blue the best so fayte:smallsmile:
And ok ok ill wait:smallfrown:

[Fay Graydon]

Votes so far:
2x Fayte
1x Aaron
Zero (guy with shades)
2x Android
1x ??? (Super secret may be awesome sub story arc group?)

EDIT: updated,
comon i need more votes guys :smallfrown:

[Tiffanie Lirle]

Throwing in a vote for Aaron.

[Green-Shirt Q]

I vote for who I always vote for when it come down to ANYTHING.

I vote for Q!

[Grim ranger]

Fayt, you are doing splendid job with this backstory. Keep it up! :smallbiggrin:

And throwing vote for Android

[Fay Graydon]

I vote for who I always vote for when it come down to ANYTHING.

I vote for Q!

you cant vote for Q,
he is:
A) not a character up for voting
and B) you haven't even asked for a cameo so he doesn't exist at this point in time :smallamused:

[memnarch]

You forgot C) egomaniac. :smalltongue:

[DoomITP]

I vote for fayte


and since q didn't ask can I have a cameo?! :smalltongue:

[Elrond]

When do you think the next comic will be up?? coz i cant wait:smallsmile:

[Green-Shirt Q]

you cant vote for Q,
he is:
A) not a character up for voting
and B) you haven't even asked for a cameo so he doesn't exist at this point in time :smallamused:


Eh. I always vote for Q. Even if he's not someone I can vote for, I'll still vote for Q.

AND YES I HAVE ASKED YOU FOR A CAMEO!!!!! I PM'D YOU!!!!!!!!:smallfurious:

[Bayar]

Eh. I always vote for Q. Even if he's not someone I can vote for, I'll still vote for Q.

AND YES I HAVE ASKED YOU FOR A CAMEO!!!!! I PM'D YOU!!!!!!!!:smallfurious:

It is a good thing that you are not allowed to vote in RL. Because some people that tallies votes would get confused at a certain vote that has Q for mayor / president. But they would probably discard it since it isnt valid :tongue:

[Fay Graydon]

right well, by the way the votes are going there will be a comic about Fayte and the Android...
hmmm:smallamused:
I think i could do that.... but ill give everyone till tomorrow till i start the comic.
as for the whole cameos and stuff....
comon!
its coming up to Cashmass!
you lot should be thankful im even making any comics his week:smalltongue:

[Lyinginbedmon]

you lot should be thankful im even making any comics his week:smalltongue:

I'm certainly not stopping, and I've got an overnight live video feed in about 2.5 hours

[DoomITP]

Sweet! Guess who's hanging out on the site till you start! :smallbiggrin:

[Elrond]

right well, by the way the votes are going there will be a comic about Fayte and the Android...
hmmm:smallamused:
I think i could do that.... but ill give everyone till tomorrow till i start the comic.
as for the whole cameos and stuff....
comon!
its coming up to Cashmass!
you lot should be thankful im even making any comics his week:smalltongue:
Hey wonder how i feal my comic is basicly a ginat cameo story:smalltongue:

[Elrond]

Sorry about the double post but is this comic dead to??:smallfrown:

[Fay Graydon]

Sorry about the double post but is this comic dead to??:smallfrown:

NO...
its christmass break.
im enjoying eating chocolate, making Orks, and playing card games...
and yes i happen to be scripting it out...
plus im having trouble making a tiger(ish) template

[memnarch]

There's a tiger at the bottom of the comic if you want help. OotS 453 (http://www.giantitp.com/comics/oots0453.html)

[Fay Graydon]

koolio thanks:smallsmile:

[Fay Graydon]

Dragoon: "Sir the readers are revolting"
Mysterious Big Bad: "I know! There Hideous!"
Dragoon: "No sir I mean they are demanding some art! anything!"
Mysterious Big Bad: "Fine! Bring out the Artist"
ME: "Lemme Go!"
Mysterious Big Bad: "They want something! give them a banner or a filler to shut them up!"
ME: "Well I do have a new banner..."
Mysterious Big Bad: "Give it to them man!"

http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday/bannerofGORE.png
TADAA!
whadda you guys think?

[Reinholdt]

Ah. Your stuff is always amusing Fayt. :smallbiggrin:
*flees from large quantities of gore*

[Fay Graydon]

I know your all wondering where the comic has gone...
well um, it's here!!!!
It was the Turkey all along!

comic:
http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday/Comic2Part5.png

[Reinholdt]

Ok. That was awesome. New sound you never want to hear while running from something.

"OM NOM NOM" :smallbiggrin:

[Fay Graydon]

Yeah, dunno what the fing should be called tho :smalltongue:
I just drew it in my madness :smallbiggrin:

[Tempest Fennac]

The banner is neat. I really like the Dire Wolf-thing as well. I'm creating a CN Lupin bounty hunting ranger named Marr Bloodfang for a D&D game at the minute; would that name work for the wolf?

[Fay Graydon]

well, i originally fort that it could be a Tig-wolf (monster hunter reference)
but the name you fort up could work:smalltongue:
no, is your yours...
is MARR BLOODFANG :smallbiggrin:

[memnarch]

Tiger-wolf-rat thing! Help!

:smallbiggrin:

[Tempest Fennac]

I never played that game to be honest. I'm pleased you liked my name, though. :)

[Fay Graydon]

(Come brothers gather up our wolves, to battle we will ride...)
http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday/FayteonTigWolf.png

"IS MARR BLOODFANG! get yer own!"

[Traker]

PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAASE New comic.

[Elrond]

I second this motion:smallsmile:

[Fay Graydon]

Hehe sorry guys, I've been so busy lately that I haven't made a comic for yonks :smallredface:
I've been busy with a friend of mine talking about an (amateur) movie adaptation but I PROMISE that i will reward your loyalty, perseverance and continued nagging with more comics :smallsmile:
(In fact, I shall start the next one withing the hour *clenches fist in dramatic anime pose with coat billowing in the absence of wind despite-the-fact-I-happen-to-be-indoors*)

[CrimsonAngel]

WOOHOO! :smallbiggrin:

[Fay Graydon]

Okay! here it is :smallbiggrin:

New comic:
http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday/Comic2part6.png

[Lyinginbedmon]

Forget bowrifles, I'll take a shotbow any day :smallbiggrin:

[Tiffanie Lirle]

A shotbow isn't gonna help you much when the other guy has a bowzooka.

Also, a bowrifle seems really impractical. :smalltongue:

[Fay Graydon]

Also, a bowrifle seems really impractical. :smalltongue:

Not when I load in the explosive rounds.:smalltongue:

[Tiffanie Lirle]

Does it shoot boxing gloves to? :smalltongue:
http://cdn-www.cracked.com/articleimages/dan/fic_weps/glove.jpg

[Fay Graydon]

No... But now i really, really wish it did :smallbiggrin::smalltongue:

[memnarch]

Why is the first frame fuzzy?

[Fay Graydon]

Why is the first frame fuzzy?

Itz coz 'e's swearin' extra hard, so 'e's got to be extra censored, innit?

(Sorry, feeling in an orky mood right now.:smalltongue::smalltongue:)

[memnarch]

The entire sentence though? :smalltongue:

[Lyinginbedmon]

The entire sentence though? :smalltongue:

Have you ever seen Austin Powers?

[memnarch]

No. Filler text

[Elrond]

Have you ever seen Austin Powers?
Yes:smallsmile:

[Fay Graydon]

basically it says:
OH F**K THAT W*****RS
P**S & S**T IN A TOILET!
... which is why it was blurred...
that and the fact I didnt think it was that good a line and was too lazy to resize another mouth to fit with body size...

talking about body size, does everyone like the increased size?
ive done it so that detail can be seen more easily.:smallsmile:

EDIT:
also... banner contest....
Make a banner about any aspect of my comic (feel free to PM about details for certain organisations (WILL NOT GIVE AWAY PLOT DETAILS! so dont ask :smallannoyed:))
ending date.... mmmmmm *puts on thinking face* when ever i feel like it... lets go for 22nd of February
Dimentions need to be:
468px by 100px
(I shall honor the winner by using their banner in my sig to advertise the comic :smallsmile:)
and if you copypasta from my comic or existing banners *puts on friendly smile full of malice*

[CrimsonAngel]

I'de make a banner but your characters are all insanely hard to draw. :smallannoyed:

[Elrond]

I think i have an idea for a banner:smallsmile:

[Fay Graydon]

New comic:
http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday/Comic2part7.png

And just a reminder that all entries to the contest are to be in by 22nd of February

[Lyinginbedmon]

That's one heck of a taser

[Fay Graydon]

Doubles as an automatic cow-to-burger matcine... no cooking required :smalltongue:

Oh and Lying... i tried to do a vidcast like you :smallbiggrin:
Doesn't work so well with a crappy laptop cam and a headset mic :smallannoyed:
=P

[Fay Graydon]

New comic:
http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday/Comic2part8.png

And that concludes Episode 2.
Join us at the same time next week for the next exciting installment of:
"Dawn of Yesterday"

[memnarch]

Hmm... short and confusing.

[Fay Graydon]

well here's a little introduction for Episode 3 to keep you vultu readers happy :smallsmile:

Episode 3:
http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday/Comic3part1.png

And would it be too much to ask for some more feedback?
Comon guys... how can I improve? what would make the comic better?

[BRC]

Get used to it, that said, Nice artwork so far, though I'm having a little trouble following the story, why is Fayte expecting to be considered a "Guest of honor"?

[Tempest Fennac]

I think he was being sarcastic about being chained up.

[Nameless]

I've just read through all the comics I've missed.
Yay I got a cameo!
Nice work Fayte. (:

[Fay Graydon]

though I'm having a little trouble following the story
Its like something by J.J.Abrams :smalltongue:


why is Fayte expecting to be considered a "Guest of honor"?
...Yeah this Episode i'm trying reverse story telling...

[memnarch]

More explanation of things. More logical sequences, such as the first three comics you made. As apposed to the seemingly random panels in the previous comic. Also, too much blank space is a bad thing; little decorations or speech bubbles can help cover that.

[Traker]

At least it is not Faytes head.

[Fay Graydon]

Sorry about not having posted any comics recently... So I'll start this baby up again and make it up to you with these:
DAWN OF YESTERDAY DESKTOP BACKGROUNDS!

Lost Memories:
http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday/myscreen.png

Purity and Chaos:
http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday/PurityandChaosdesktop.png

[Lyinginbedmon]

Should we take this to mean this'll be starting all the way back up sometime soon?

[Fay Graydon]

Yes.
Yes I shall ^-^
*Revs up comic*
I've had time to mull the comic over and decide on where I wanna go with it...
Some of you will be able to identify a character to expect...
Don't spoil it though if you know who I'm talking about...

The Graydon's back in the building!
BooYAH!

[Eldrys]

Yes finally(not referencing previous post) I clcked on the banner and have been looking for the thread for a half-hour(1. I don't know haw to subscribe to a thread without posting in it 2. I didn't know there was a sub-forum for Fan comics) This looks really good and the most likely comic not to stop as soon as I post in it.

[Fay Graydon]

Gah! getting... bogged... down... again!
Help me Fan peoples!
*starts drowning under Avatar requests, comics, ABR, other interwebz and shiny new gaming computer*
Noooo!
Right...
Step one:
Finish Avatars.
Step two:
Do comic.
Step three:
Do ABR comic.
Step four:
Bugger off to other interwebs and gamesland till next week!

On a completely unrelated note:
Tis ma Birfhday day after tomorow =3

[Lyinginbedmon]

Happy pre-emptive Birthday :smallsmile:

[Falgorn]

Happy birthday which is tommorow!:smallbiggrin::smallbiggrin:

[Nameless]

I will wish you a happy birthday in 4 hours and 36 minuets. :smallsmile:

[Fay Graydon]

Guys, Guys...
Day AFTER tomorrow.
:smallbiggrin:
But thank's anyway ^-^
God... i'll be 18... :smalleek:

[The Blackbird]

Day AFTER tomorrow.



Ahhhh:smalleek:! Bad global warming movie.

Just kidding it was okay.

[memnarch]

Bah, I turned 18 in January; it's not that big a deal. Happy early birthday! :smallcool:

[Nameless]

I'm still 16. *feels young*

*Cradles last 13months of childhood*

[CrimsonAngel]

*feels even younger* Your all older than me. :smallfrown:

[X2]

I'm still 16. *feels young*

*Cradles last 13months of childhood*

Welcome to the fold brother...

[Nameless]

All women in this comic must wear TINY MINI-SKIRTS! *maniacal laughter* O_e

[CrimsonAngel]

All women in this comic must wear TINY MINI-SKIRTS! *maniacal laughter* O_e

YES!


Hey, that guy in the recent comic is the guy who syabbed the guy in the first few comics, the brunette.

[memnarch]

All women in this comic must wear TINY MINI-SKIRTS! *maniacal laughter* O_e
Personally, I would rather there BE a comic, instead of thinking about a comic that may or may not have mini-skirts.

[Nameless]

Scratch that then...

All characters must wear TINY MINI-SKIRTS!

[The Blackbird]

Scratch that then...

All characters must wear TINY MINI-SKIRTS!

(To Transformers theme)

Transvestites more than meets the eye!
Or...
Transvestites are they girls or guys?

[Nameless]

(To Transformers theme)

Transvestites more than meets the eye!
Or...
Transvestites are they girls or guys?

First one! :smallbiggrin:

[X2]

All women in this comic must wear TINY MINI-SKIRTS! *maniacal laughter* O_e

Nameless for governer!

[Fay Graydon]

*Yawns*
Ah quit /b/itchin aboot meh comic :smallannoyed:.
I try to enjoy ma 18fh birthday and can't...
Ill make one soon...
Promise...

[Falgorn]

HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!! (Totally didn't forget...) :smallbiggrin: :smallbiggrin: :smallbiggrin: :smallbiggrin: :smallbiggrin: :smallbiggrin:

[The Blackbird]

Happy birthday.

Sings happy birthday song again, and again, and again, and again, again, and again, and again, and again,again, and again, and again, and again, again, and again, and again, and again.

[Lyinginbedmon]

*Yawns*
Ah quit /b/itchin aboot meh comic :smallannoyed:.
I try to enjoy ma 18fh birthday and can't...
Ill make one soon...
Promise...

On my 18th I was shot twice in the crotch point-blank in rapid succession.

That was a fun day :smallbiggrin:

[Falgorn]

OHHHH! For he's a jolly good fellow, for he's a jolly good fellow, for he's a jolly good fellow!!!! That nobody can deny! :smallsmile:

[Szilard]

Thissssssssssssssss isssssssssssssssss yourrrrrrrrrrrrr birthday song!
It isn't very long!

This is the second verse!
It's shorter than the first!
:smallbiggrin:

[Fay Graydon]

My Birthday was aweseom!
Got a guitar!
Got Cash!
Got a Full Metal Alchemist Pocketwatch!
Got Drunk! =D
Twas a good day... mostly...

BTW:
Anyone wanna help me out?
Tell ya how...
I either need concept art for new grunts...
or I wants some Fan Art!!!!
>.<
please!
I mean... do i even have fans?

*refuses to do any more untill i has Fan art*
(Basically I'm stalling untill i can commit a decent amouth of story to notepad to know what im gunna do with this story...)

[Lemming]

Here is some fan art:

:smallbiggrin:
/|\
/\
Mr. smiley!
Now get back to work! :smalltongue:

[The Blackbird]

My Birthday was aweseom!
Got a guitar!
Got Cash!
Got a Full Metal Alchemist Pocketwatch!
Got Drunk! =D
Twas a good day... mostly...

BTW:
Anyone wanna help me out?
Tell ya how...
I either need concept art for new grunts...
or I wants some Fan Art!!!!
>.<
please!
I mean... do i even have fans?

*refuses to do any more untill i has Fan art*
(Basically I'm stalling untill i can commit a decent amouth of story to notepad to know what im gunna do with this story...)

Very well, you shall have fan art

http://s617.photobucket.com/albums/tt252/Blackbird_07/th_littlestickfigures.jpgNow go make a new goddamn comic
Just so you know because I don't know how to increase the size of the image, the right one's Fayt and the other is Aaron.
I'm just joking with ya.

EDIT:
Here is some fan art:

:smallbiggrin:
/|\
/\
Mr. smiley!
Now get back to work! :smalltongue:

Gah! Someone beat me to it. Darn.

[Nameless]

Here is some fan art:

:smallbiggrin:
/|\
/\
Mr. smiley!
Now get back to work! :smalltongue:

I LAWL'd.
So Hard.

:smallbiggrin:

[Nameless]

http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x203/tomshaer/DoYfanart.png

There, now get back to work. :smalltongue:

[The Gremlin]

I refuse to do any fanart. Now get to work! :smallmad::smallwink:

[Fay Graydon]

Duuuude!
Nameless did a smexy Aaron! :smalltongue:
*Puts in Fanart*

Right ^^
Ill do another Comic soon guys!
You have my Word ^^

[DoomITP]

eh,woot? :smallbiggrin:

[Fay Graydon]

T-T

Everytime i get around to comicing summink comes up....
But expect an update this weekend guys!
I give you my word!
*dramatic pose*

[Lyinginbedmon]

T-T

Everytime i get around to comicing summink comes up....
But expect an update this weekend guys!
I give you my word!
*dramatic pose*

Can we have a kidney instead? It's a little more likely to occur if we have a kidney rather than a word.

[Nameless]

Can we have a kidney instead? It's a little more likely to occur if we have a kidney rather than a word.

Agreed. Perhaps baby kidney? Baby meat is more tender.

[Elrond]

Yay new comic sooonnn:smallsmile:

[EmeraldPhoenix]

Are you ever going to post another comic?

I really liked this one. It was really promising.:smallfrown:

[Lyinginbedmon]

T-T

Everytime i get around to comicing summink comes up....
But expect an update this weekend guys!
I give you my word!
*dramatic pose*

I'll be taking that kidney Mr Graydon. :smallamused:

[Fay Graydon]

I'll be taking that kidney Mr Graydon. :smallamused:

Is alright! I already took two of yours! :smallbiggrin:

And sorry for not making a comic for ages guys... Im out of Ideas for it at the moment...
And to be honest... I kinda got bored with it... theres only so much I can do with it as I dont even write scripts >///<
The comics are literally what I feel like doing at the time...

[DoomITP]

Fayte....Shouldn't you be working on something?:smallannoyed::smalltongue:

[Fay Graydon]

I am :smallannoyed:
But I also has housework to do, as well as looking after my dogs so there :smalltongue:

[DoomITP]

Have your dogs help you do the house work then!:smalltongue:

[Fay Graydon]

This Comic is currently in a state of Hibination!
It is currently being PROPPERLY scripted... YES! It will have a decent story line!
Untill it has been scripted please look towards my other comic:
Halo: Project Classified (http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?p=3804734#post3804734)

[Fay Graydon]

To show I actually have plans on restarting this VERY soon...
I present some new character templates I've been working on.

http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday/MewDoYtemplates.png

From Left to Right:
Aaron, Fayte, Zero

EDIT:
Also!
My weapon designs and Technology Idea's are running low...
So I'm holding a "contest" [see subsection "opportunity to pinch ideas"]
The "Rules" [there really arn't any >.>] are that one has to be a new design for Zero's "Lightning" gun.
And that you have to submit at least one other design of your own!

The winner gets to see their design in the comic!
And one ticket for comic influence :smallbiggrin:

[Fay Graydon]

New comic:
Episode 3 part 2.
http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday/Comic3part2.png

[-skimmer-]

Whoa, It's back! Cool:smallbiggrin:

I just wonder where the drill disappeared to:smalltongue:

[Traker]

Yahoo!! Its back!

[Nameless]

Whoa, It's back! Cool:smallbiggrin:

I just wonder where the drill disappeared to:smalltongue:

Who cares? It's back... With BADASS! :D

[Threeshades]

Badass and ABS!

[dragongirl13]

Yaaaay! Fayte's back!

Can't wait for more comics. :3

[Fay Graydon]

I bring a comic!
and... ill have you know...
I've started scripting out the plot! :smalleek:

http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday/comic3part3.png

[Nameless]

"And why am I talking to myself as if I'm in some sort of comic strip...?

:smalltongue:"

[Fay Graydon]

Well it kinda is done as if it were a TV show... meaning I can get away with not using thought bubbles at all :smallwink:

[CrimsonAngel]

I thought he was blind. :smallconfused:

[Fay Graydon]

I thought he was blind. :smallconfused:

In an earlier comic it says he got implants.

[Fay Graydon]

New comic.
Sorry for not updating last week.
To make up for it this ones a 2 parter! :smallbiggrin:

http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday/Comic3part4.png
http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday/Comic3part5fix.png

Sorry for the messed up hair in the second pannel of number 2 :smallannoyed: Dunno what happened there, I'll sort it out ASAP!
Fixed :smallbiggrin:

[Kumo]

yay, an update =D

[Fay Graydon]

Just so you all know, I'll be updating previous comics to make them up to date.
I'll be fixing art, spelling errors, continuity errors and the likes.

I'll hopefully be getting new comics done a well though.
Also, expect information on separate bits of... thingys in the starting post.
Things like city maps, planet info.
Maybe a little History and stories.

If any of you have any ideas for past events I could turn into little stories. feel free to suggest them :smallbiggrin:

Peace and Love Yall <3

[Nameless]

Just so you all know, I'll be updating previous comics to make them up to date.
I'll be fixing art, spelling errors, continuity errors and the likes.

I'll hopefully be getting new comics done a well though.
Also, expect information on separate bits of... thingys in the starting post.
Things like city maps, planet info.
Maybe a little History and stories.

If any of you have any ideas for past events I could turn into little stories. feel free to suggest them :smallbiggrin:

Peace and Love Yall <3

"Yall"? What are you, Texan? :smalltongue:

[CrimsonAngel]

I am!!! :smallbiggrin:

[Kumo]

"Yall"? What are you, Texan? :smalltongue:

whoooo! Texas!

[Fay Graydon]

Information Removed By The Gira Prime Police Department As Illegally Obtained Information On A Race.

Thank You For Your Co-operation Citizen

[Nameless]

sorry for the lack of update, but I've been bogged down in creating races and things.
I need opinions on a creature called a "Drogre".
I can't decide on the following colour scheme:
http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday/Drogrescolourlineup.png?t=1265298011

You should use them all. Like, you know we have different races of humans. It will make it more realistic and such. :3

[Kumo]

I'm inclined towards 2, 5 or 6, personally

[CrimsonAngel]

I go with nameless.

[Fay Graydon]

Dawn of Yesterday is going through a rebooted start.
This is due to the fact, when I started the comic, it was merely a case of "that would be cool to do" and heavily influenced by Video games, Movies and books I had read recently.
The Reboot of the story will still follow the current story line, with changes so it flows better as a story, makes sense, less randomness and better art from the beginning.
I thank all my readers for being patient and hope to bring a better, more exciting story for you all to read.

The current Archive on Page One is still up and running, all other information has been removed and Shall be updated at a later date.

[Green-Shirt Q]

Dawn of Yesterday is going through a rebooted start.
This is due to the fact, when I started the comic, it was merely a case of "that would be cool to do" and heavily influenced by Video games, Movies and books I had read recently.
The Reboot of the story will still follow the current story line, with changes so it flows better as a story, makes sense, less randomness and better art from the beginning.
I thank all my readers for being patient and hope to bring a better, more exciting story for you all to read.

The current Archive on Page One is still up and running, all other information has been removed and Shall be updated at a later date.


Personally I think this is highly unnessesary, and thought the story was well-paced and smooth when I read it.

But, whatever. Do what you must. :smallsigh:

[Fay Graydon]

Personally I think this is highly unnessesary, and thought the story was well-paced and smooth when I read it.

But, whatever. Do what you must. :smallsigh:

Trust me, if you carefully read up to Episode 3 then try and work out EXACTLY whats going on. it really makes very little sense at all :P

Dont worry, it will follow the same line of plot, but will deviate to make more sense.
For example, You will find out WHAT Fayte was doing in the building at the start.

[Tempest Fennac]

Fayte asked me to post that this comic is on hold due to a lack of internet access at home.

[Fay Graydon]

Dawn of Yesterday...
R3BOOT

http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday%20Reboot/Introduction.png

[Green-Shirt Q]

-Abigail Rosewater-

Woah, you could NOT have a more feminine name, could you?! Well, not without adding "Boobykins" as your middle name. And the female gender icon on your avatar?! On your AVATAR RIGHT ABOVE your profile's gender icon?

We get it, OKAY! You're a dudette! :smalltongue:

As for the reboot introduction...
http://i39.tinypic.com/28a6tc9.jpg
TOO. MANY. WORDS!

:tongue:

[BRC]

Woah, you could NOT have a more feminine name, could you?! Well, not without adding "Boobykins" as your middle name. And the female gender icon on your avatar?! On your AVATAR RIGHT ABOVE your profile's gender icon?

We get it, OKAY! You're a dudette! :smalltongue:

As for the reboot introduction...
http://i39.tinypic.com/28a6tc9.jpg
TOO. MANY. WORDS!

:tongue:

Really, you're going to mock the name?
Also, you're one to talk about too much text. Each My Name is Q involves more text than this (And it's an introduction, establishing the setting, which is excusable).
*Makes note to keep a copy of War and Peace around in case he needs to scare Q off*

[Green-Shirt Q]

Also, you're one to talk about too much text. Each My Name is Q involves more text than this (And it's an introduction, establishing the setting, which is excusable).
*Makes note to keep a copy of War and Peace around in case he needs to scare Q off*

Yeah, but (hopefully, as it is the goal of a comic writer yet such an easy mistake to make when you don't do it) I balenced the many, many words out with pictures!

If the entire introduction was broken down into, like, 4 or 5 sentences a box and was accompanied by pictures, whether just snap shots of around the city or with the protaginists getting ready or something, it would've been a lot more enjoyable for me, the moron, to read.

I do read books, when I'm in a book mood, but when I'm in a comic mood I come here.

[BRC]

Yeah, but (hopefully, as it is the goal of a comic writer yet such an easy mistake to make when you don't do it) I balenced the many, many words out with pictures!

If the entire introduction was broken down into, like, 4 or 5 sentences a box and was accompanied by pictures, whether just snap shots of around the city or with the protaginists getting ready or something, it would've been a lot more enjoyable for me, the moron, to read.

I do read books, when I'm in a book mood, but when I'm in a comic mood I come here.
True, that's what I do, making sure something accompanies my text, usually a relevant image. I started doing that for the Vox Populi infodumps, and now use it in Rebellion|Revolution. I find it's a good way to get some high-density exposition (without having your characters stand around discussing things they should already know).

However, since she's just trying to establish the general idea of the setting, it works. The alternative to this would be for Fayte to draw a wide view of the City, something that would take a lot of work to do properly, and would rarely be used again. As a comic maker, I can sympathize with this
Either way, I look forward to seeing what happens with this.

[Fay Graydon]

Comic 1 Reboot.

http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday%20Reboot/Shadowplay1.png

[sean o the dead]

awesome! kind of reminds me of splinter cell, though :smalltongue:

[Nameless]

awesome! kind of reminds me of splinter cell, though :smalltongue:

I think that was the idea. Make it a sort of spoof of films and video games... but in a serious way.

Anyway, nice first comic. :3

[Fay Graydon]

I think that was the idea. Make it a sort of spoof of films and video games... but in a serious way.

Anyway, nice first comic. :3

Not really :smalltongue:
I thought the following:
"Hmmm.... so in the First "Episode" I want Fayte on a stealth mission... what would he wear... well dark clothes and night vision goggles"

Only later when a friend pointed it out to me did I realize it was like Splinter Cell.

And now I'm tempted to have someone say: "I heard you Sam..." :smalltongue:

[Nameless]

Not really :smalltongue:
I thought the following:
"Hmmm.... so in the First "Episode" I want Fayte on a stealth mission... what would he wear... well dark clothes and night vision goggles"

Only later when a friend pointed it out to me did I realize it was like Splinter Cell.


Didn't we argue for like, 5 minutes whether or not the goggles looked like splinter cell? :smalltongue:

[Fay Graydon]

Didn't we argue for like, 5 minutes whether or not the goggles looked like splinter cell? :smalltongue:

SHHHHH! :smalleek:

[Fay Graydon]

Comic 2

http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday%20Reboot/Shadowplay2.png

[Fay Graydon]

http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday%20Reboot/Shadowplay3.png

[Fay Graydon]

http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday%20Reboot/Shadowplay4.png

No one like my comic enough to even comment? :smallfrown:

[Kumo]

No one like my comic enough to even comment? :smallfrown:

Just cuz you don't get comments doesn't mean people don't like it.

[Tulio d Bard]

Just found this comic. Excellent one, may I say. And with a different approach from the others I saw.

[Fay Graydon]

New comic
http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday%20Reboot/Shadowplay5.png

[Nameless]

"So Mr. Fayte, you thought the dark could keep you hidden? Well, you made one mistake... Your goggles are glowing bright green."

He didn't think this out very well, did he? :smalltongue:

[Kumo]

"So Mr. Fayte, you thought the dark could keep you hidden? Well, you made one mistake... Your goggles are glowing bright green."

He didn't think this out very well, did he? :smalltongue:

Neither did splinter cell, apparently.

EDIT: Now that i think about it, the tubes would have made the light only visible (in splineter cell's) from straight into his eyes, at which point you already know where he is anyway

[Tulio d Bard]

ARG!

There are dark dots in the corners (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Grid_illusion)!

EDIT: I don't think this guard will be much of a trouble...

[Fay Graydon]

Sorry I didn't update over the weekend.
See if you can see why... >.>

http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday%20Reboot/Shadowplay6.png

[Nameless]

Sorry I didn't update over the weekend.
See if you can see why... >.>

http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday%20Reboot/Shadowplay6.png

That was awesome. :smallcool:

[Tulio d Bard]

Sorry I didn't update over the weekend.
See if you can see why... >.>

Oh god, you may have spent a good time doing this one.

[Fay Graydon]

Oh god, you may have spent a good time doing this one.

about 2 hours trying to draw the Explosion...
And i dont like how the one where panel 4 should have been :smallannoyed:

[Fay Graydon]

New comic!
http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday%20Reboot/Shadowplay7.png

I'm going along with the jerky panel's to show how the explosion has make the building somewhat unstable for the time being :smallbiggrin:

[sean o the dead]

heh. "i gotta stop being so damn cool!" awesome. :smallamused:

[Tulio d Bard]

heh. "i gotta stop being so damn cool!" awesome. :smallamused:

Hehe. I also really liked that one.

I'll certainly say it one of these days. :smalltongue:

[Fay Graydon]

Hehe. I also really liked that one.

I'll certainly say it one of this days. :smalltongue:

Do you mean
"One of those days"? :smallsmile:

[Tulio d Bard]

Do you mean
"One of those days"? :smallsmile:

"One of these days" actually, but thanks anyway. Corrected it.

[Fay Graydon]

Sorry it's been so long since my last update.
http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday%20Reboot/Shadowplay8.png

[Fay Graydon]

I bring the start of episode 2!

A Day in the Life:
http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday%20Reboot/ADayintheLife1.png

[Terry576]

What does F.A.E stand for?

Freedom Association for Equality?

Fail And Epic?

WHAT DOES IT MEAN?!?!? :smallmad::smallyuk::smallfurious:

Nice comic by the way.

[Nameless]

Brother? How come one's a cat dude and the other isn't? o_o

[Fay Graydon]

What does F.A.E stand for?

Freedom Association for Equality?

Fail And Epic?

WHAT DOES IT MEAN?!?!? :smallmad::smallyuk::smallfurious:

Nice comic by the way.

F.A.E. Stands for "Freedom and Equalization".
Which are the 2 things they are fighting for.


Brother? How come one's a cat dude and the other isn't? o_o

Ah yes, I haven't gotten around to Character Bio's yet have I =\
Well I'll get around to updating the Character Bio's this coming weekend.

As for why, Basically...
As a child Aaron was subjected to DNA alteration treatment.
I have yet to decide if it was to fix his DNA or just to see if it was possible.


Also, Sorry for not having updated in yonks, My laptop screen broke and I've had my Boyfriend down for a week.
But I should have an update for you all before Monday at the very least. :smallsmile:

[Fay Graydon]

Update

http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday%20Reboot/ADayintheLife2.png

Sorry for lateless of comic.
Should be back on track with updates soon.
But I've not got the correct font for the Text for the logo :smallfrown: Don't even know what it was called to get it again.

[Bothi]

HEY FAY GREY, yay ok, is there any way you could make a website for this? these- www.webs.com www.wetpaint.com and www.wapzan.com are free (last one is for mobile devices). A friend told me 'bout this since I like oots, but my computer doesnt open spoilers. Kind of a big request, but you might want to think about it, especialy as the comic grows.

[Fay Graydon]

HEY FAY GREY, yay ok, is there any way you could make a website for this? these- www.webs.com www.wetpaint.com and www.wapzan.com are free (last one is for mobile devices). A friend told me 'bout this since I like oots, but my computer doesnt open spoilers. Kind of a big request, but you might want to think about it, especialy as the comic grows.

Well... once I'm back on scedule, the main project I'll be working on will be the "Dawn of Yesterday RPG" d20/100

OR

Many people have asked me to continue with Halo: Project Classified... However If i were to do that then H:PC would be almost a flashback character for someone in a sequel comic I've been planning for around a year now.
Which is set years after Halo giving me more freedom to MSU.

[Fay Graydon]

To celebrate my return to GiantITP and the impending continuation of Dawn of Yesterday...
I'm giving one lucky reader the chance to get a piece of writing to become cannon!

The compertision is very simple.
Just submit a piece of Writing Via PM to me or email it to me (PM to get my address)
Detailing the creation of the Planet Crystaria.

Certain things you must cover are the gods: (God of fire, water, wind, earth and the god sisters of flora and fauna)
The creation of crystals and gems that give off a radiation which is how magic works on this planet.

Do not go into detail about the races on the planet as I am currently writing a few short stories entitled "Day before Dusk" detailing all the major races and characters of historical importance in the history of Crystaria.
Please be creative with the names of the gods, do not rip off any gods from existing mythos, real world or that you saw in another comic or peice of work.

The minimum word count is 1500
The compertision ends on April 14th (My birthday)

I hope to see lots of pieces of writing and there will be a prize (other then their work becoming Cannon)

Good Luck!

Idea Sucked, Ended up with so much fluff Im writing it myself XD

[Fay Graydon]

http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/Dawn%20of%20Yesterday%20Reboot/Destinycall.png

[Omicroncubed]

And just a few days ago I was wondering whatever happened to "Resuming soon" :smalltongue:

[Fay Graydon]

Well now I've lost my job, I'll have more time to work on projects.
I resumed working on the "Prysma" RPG (Which is based on the DoY universe I concocted in my mind), And kinda had to attempt to come back to DoY itself... kinda think I should loose the "An ABR Backstory" now though... Started off as a Backstory but the only thing I share is the main character's name and appearance XD

[Mina Kobold]

Looking forward to seeing future work from you, Fay. Both comics and RPG work. :smallsmile:

Perhaps it is the backstory of a different version of Fayte! Although, that would not really help explain how the ABR Fayte got to where they are now. But that's mere detail! :3

[Fay Graydon]

Looking forward to seeing future work from you, Fay. Both comics and RPG work. :smallsmile:

Perhaps it is the backstory of a different version of Fayte! Although, that would not really help explain how the ABR Fayte got to where they are now. But that's mere detail! :3

Me to! I mean I've been working on my RPG for er bout a year and a half... maybe two...
Currently got the following down:
Magic System(s),
Armour "3 Tier Layer" system,
BattleFlow™ System,
Races,
Experience + "Level Gaining" system (I use the word "Level" loosely)

And dunno never thought about it, to me Fayte is Fayte :P

[Fay Graydon]

http://i363.photobucket.com/albums/oo79/Ikaeru/dawn%20of%20yesterday%20the%20last%20aether.png (http://s363.photobucket.com/user/Ikaeru/media/dawn%20of%20yesterday%20the%20last%20aether.png.ht ml)

[ti'esar]

Assuming the somewhat inauspicious date is just a coincidence, it would be neat to see this revived. The fantasy-meets-cyberpunk concept is pretty cool.

[Fay Graydon]

Assuming the somewhat inauspicious date is just a coincidence, it would be neat to see this revived. The fantasy-meets-cyberpunk concept is pretty cool.

Heh tbh i didnt think about the date. I was just like "You know what, I feel like restarting my comic again" and decided that as its my birthday on april 14th I would start posting the new comics in april.

[Emperor Ing]

Well it's good that there's even the possibility of this sub-forum becoming populated again.