Lady Moreta - Leith: Honestly? I didn't like it much. It's not up to your usual standard; the description seems forced and is hard for me to envision clearly in my mind, and a lot of your sentence transitions could be smoother - the whole thing, in fact, has a tendency to chop awkwardly where it could flow. I've got difficulty connecting to Leith as a result, and the lack of context on her history or why she's adventuring (or even why she's on the boat in the first place, which doesn't clearly appear until the end) only serves to distance her from the reader further.

Now critique the Host of a Thousand Princes (Part II) or face my eternal wrath >.>