Quote Originally Posted by SamBurke View Post
Oh, yeah, said that way it sounds great. I was mispronouncing it...

The fourth and fifth lines are the only lines I'd worry about re-working.

Is it going to be read, or are you going to read it at the graduation?
I'm inscribing it (in my hideous chicken-scratch) on the inside cover of a copy of Oh, the places you'll go. I'm guessing my friends are going to make me read it to them, but it's not going to be read at the ceremony or any such.

By fourth and fifth do you mean the fourth and fifth of the second paragraph, or the fourth and fifth of the poem as a whole?