Quote Originally Posted by SleepyShadow View Post
Besides, Tom's player really did fall down laughing.
Oh, I definitely caught that. And I figured that's what was going on as far as the style is concerned, but I think you could still get the casual feeling across without sacrificing the impact to the reader. To get the entertainment across I feel like you just need something to tie it off.

Quote Originally Posted by mebecronck
Devils. Not demons.
To be honest, I'm actually kind of relieved to get this clarification. I was a little worried that your campaign had wandered into a mexican-american race war of some kind