But... Balors are demons...

Eheheheheh, is he writing this on a computer?

I really like your descriptions of all the modern-day stuff, especially this line:

It was explained to me that the machines that ran the place were subservient to one that made power for them.
Though it was a little jarring to see 'gas station' just thrown around without the quotes you used on "'car'", since it's surely not a term he's familiar with.

Did Irthos' player leave/swap Irthos out for Elle?