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    PirateGirl

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    Default Re: [3.5] Slightly-Homebrewed, Steampunk-y mercenary camp! (ECL 1 to 13)[WIP, PEACH]

    Lightning Lieutenant has a really weird attack.

    You have it as:
    Attack: Lightning Rods +9/+9/+4/+4 melee (1d6+3+1d6(Electricity) )
    It looks like it should be this:

    Attack: 1 lightning rod +9 melee (1d6+3 plus d6 electricity)
    Full Attack: 2 lightning rods +9/+4 melee (1d6 +2 plus 1d6 electricity), OR 1 lightning rod +7/+2 melee (1d6+3 plus 1d6 electricity) and 1 lightning rod +7/+2 melee (1d6+1 plus 1d6 electricity)

    The attack for the squad leader is wrong too since it only has BAB +3 it only gets one attack.

    You have it as:
    Attack: Lightning Club +5/+5 melee (1d6+2+2(Electricity) )
    It should be:

    Attack: Lightning club +5 melee (1d6+2 plus 1d6 electricity)

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    Last edited by Debihuman; 2012-06-20 at 04:48 PM.
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