In the mean time...lets have a critiquing party of our own! I think I did a decent job with Paper...though I haven't gotten a response...at least I don't think I did...

Anyways, it made me want to do a little more...

So do you have any requests, mebe? If you'd like to return the favor, my story a few pages ago I wouldn't mind a final critique on - Close to Home. See OP for link.