Thanks for the feedback Debby! I made a few of the notes you suggested, fixed some typos, etc.

One thing I would note is that the Air aura is +30ft., meaning get it is intended to give 30 more feet of flight to itself and allies that already possess a fly speed.

Other than that, I think you've really helped clean this entry up, and when I get home of can get on a proper computer and add your example to the OP, if that's alright with you! Also plan to add descriptions for the domains, as well as officially enumerating their abilities