Quote Originally Posted by ti'esar View Post
Wow, a new fan comic! I didn't even notice this until I saw it in your signature.

I'm enjoying the style and humor so far - it's pretty professionally done. The only real thing that bugged me is that Pellan's exclamation at the end of the first comic seemed a little clunky/oddly worded.
Thanks to you as well!

And yeah, I could see that feeling "off". I went through a few sentences before settling on that one, and I wonder if dropping the "Then" off the beginning of the sentence would be enough to make it feel smoother.

I've been known to intentionally load my written character dialogue with weird grammar from time to time just because people can be like that, but this wasn't one of those times.

Glad to see someone else interested, in any case!