Thanks to you as well!
And yeah, I could see that feeling "off". I went through a few sentences before settling on that one, and I wonder if dropping the "Then" off the beginning of the sentence would be enough to make it feel smoother.
I've been known to intentionally load my written character dialogue with weird grammar from time to time just because people can be like that, but this wasn't one of those times.
Glad to see someone else interested, in any case!