IC thread updated.
I *think* Guard #1 can see Dalen from his updated position on the map, but if it would matter he does still have 5' of movement left which could let him get into the actual alleyway in row P, the same row Dalen is in. I don't think even with it being low-light the guard should be unable to see Dalen - at that distance it would be DC 8 and Dalen just got done casting. But of course being human he does take the 20% miss chance penalty for low-light.

I'm handling them pretty much in post order, although you're welcome to notify me if your character is specifically waiting for something. I will also try to assume your character is not a fool, and goes running into AoE effects if it's reasonable for them to wait a second.