Love it. Has a very good feel for the Moon People.
"Stern Folk" -- that's great, and of course how the Moon People would see the Zath.
I started writing something but this week has been hell at work, and DST is kicking my butt.
Last edited by Max_Killjoy; 2018-03-15 at 04:38 PM.
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Verisimilitude -- n, the appearance or semblance of truth, likelihood, or probability.
The concern is not realism in speculative fiction, but rather the sense that a setting or story could be real, fostered by internal consistency and coherence.
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