2019-03-08, 10:52 PM (ISO 8601)
Re: [PF] Prologue to the End - (Closed to New Interest)
So, interesting character - a torturer of all things lol. However, we revisit some familiar questions; where did Miryks learn his trade and towards what end? What led him to develop such a misanthropic perspective? What did he feel the Club 'understood' and why did he care? What does he himself hope to achieve? We don't understand Miryks yet, his values, or why he acts; what makes him tick. Maybe he's just a psychopath, but his methods come across as purposeful, and motivated by reason. We need to understand those motivations before we can understand where he's going. Try to flesh that out and then you'll have a rather intriguing character.
Originally Posted by flat_footed