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    Default Re: Eating Grass

    Quite funny, actually. The colors are a bit garish, and you might want to run it through a spellchecker, but the pacing is good, and the characters have an original feel to them.

    Oh, and I suggest you edit your first post to show all comics you've done so far, not just the first one. That way, people don't have to dig through the discussion thread to read the story.

    EDIT: One more thing, the relative size between the (gnome wizard?) and the (human rogue?) seems to vary from panel to panel. I presume that's not intentional.
    Last edited by Catharsis; 2008-04-07 at 07:27 AM.
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