Campaign Setting/Game System Work, need advice. PEACH

[Katasi]

Just glancing over it right now, but everything looks pretty good (although I do agree that fluff would be nice).

Could you elaborate how Vitality points work? I know they're in the SRD, but I've never quite understood them from that alone. If I know that, I can help tell you how your magic system looks.

Also, I'm assuming Weapon Defense doesn't stack with Two Weapon Defense, right?

You are correct. Weapon Defense doesn't stack with TWD

I agree with all of you, I still need alot of fluff. I've been working on the crunch alot, I'll work on summarizing it though, and adding fluff.