Looks good overall to me, like the rest of your 3.x Epic Destinies. Quick question: where is the hero's blade spell located? You might could mention that in the entry just for reference.
It's in the Eberron Campaign Setting.
I no longer actively read the forums, and probably won't respond to any PMs. I'm fine with people using my homebrew in anything, including fan-compilations and wikis, as long as you credit me.