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    Default Re: Magic in the Mists (Ethereal Magic) [3.5 Classes PEACH]

    I mean no offense here, but most DMs have trouble taking homebrew seriously unless it's been thoroughly revised and edited, and your misspellings and misuse of "your/you're" make this look kind of unprofessional.

    Something to think about as you're making new content. Revising the old stuff is just as important.

    I won't point out the misspellings here unless asked to avoid embarassing you, though.
    Last edited by Cheesy74; 2010-07-17 at 05:49 PM.
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    The Phase Dancer - A spellsword who has learned to use teleportation to stab people.
    The Stalwart - An unarmed, unarmored wall of muscle that fights with surges of strength and massive combat maneuver combos.