ANyone intrested: Naruto 4e

[Darksword]

I was wondering if anyone would like to attempt narutol 4e with me. I have some ideas, but would like to hear others as well.

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My first idea is instead of races, clans, or you can choose no clan and just be human. So here is the first clan. Also I'll need help with the powers, they'll take a while

Akimichi Clan
Ability scores: +2 con, +2 str,
Size: Medoum
Speed: 4
Vision: Normal

Languages: Common
Body Fat: When you are bloodied you get +2 to AC, and Fort, and Resist 2 to all damage.
Heavy Dude: Any time you are fatigued for a set number of rounds, that number is halved. This does not work for any racial powers, feats, or items.
Nikudan Sensha - Human Bullet Tank: Can be used as a encounter power


Nikudan Sensha - Human Bullet Tank Akimichi Clan taijutsu
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You gather your energy, through out your body and grow into a giant ball, and rage at your foe.
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Encounter*Tai,growth,
Full round personal/Other (see below)
Attack: Str v.s Ref
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Effect: You take up 2x2 squares until the beginning of your next turn. You can move up to 10 squares, but it take 3 squares to turn by one square. Any foes in your path is attacked, and pushed by one square away from you.
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Hit: 1D10 damage + Str
Miss: Half damage
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AT level 11 the damage is increased to 2d10, and at level 21 to 3d10.
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edit: I have a list of what need to be stated, that we have decided on. Since, we are still talking about what should be done for classes, jutsus and a bit about feats, and alot bout demons, it only has clans listed so far.

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Clans/Races
we are almost done with cannon clans.
Aburame Clan
Akamichi Clan
Fuuma Clan
Hyuga Clan
inuzkak clan
[s]Kaguya Clan[s]
Nara Clan
Sakon and Ukon ??????? maybe (later)
Senju clan (later)
Uchia clan
Yamanaka clan

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classes
ninja

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class traits

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nin
tai
gen
medic

class featues
we need more of all types

paragon paths

Epic Destinies

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feats

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these are the feats we have done
Heroic

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-Kuchiyose no Jutsu
-Bloodline: Shargingon (single TOma)
-Bloodline: two Toma
-Puppeteer
-Improved Puppeteering
-Taijutsu Opportunist
-Reconstruction
-Bloodline: Kayuga bone corspe path
-Katon Master
-Suton Master
-Raiton Master
-Doton Master
-Fuuton Master
-Bone Weapon Fighter
-Gouken Ryuu - Strong Fist Style
-Bubun Baika no Jutsu - Partial Multi-Size Technique
-Draw the power out
-Jutsu Focus

Paragon

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-Greater Reconstruction
-Mokuton jutsu user
-Hyoton jutsu user
-Advanced Gouken Ryuu - Strong Fist Style
-One handed signer
-Weapon sign

Epic

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-Epic Reconstruction

Multiclassing

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-Special Demon: One tail Shukah
-Jinchuuriki (MultiClass)

Power Swap

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-Sand Master

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We need more jutsu
We need anything not crossed out from the lists above,(except the feat list)
We need someone to work on the garra auto sand sheild, and demon feats/powers.

[Xallace]

I have to ask: if clan abilities are races, then what are the classes?

EDIT: By which I mean, with some more idea of how the whole thing will be set up, I'm perfectly willing to help.

[RTGoodman]

Don't know jack about Naruto, but I can tell you off-hand that your ability score modifiers don't come close to following the 4E design conceit. Strictly speaking, races are designed to be good at some things, but never necessarily bad. No other race has an penalties to ability scores, and besides humans (who get +2 to one) and Changelings (who get +2 Cha and +2 to either Dex or Int), all races get +2 to two ability scores. For balance's sake, I suggest sticking with it.

[Darksword]

CLass abilites cover non clan/bloodline jutusus. (Rasenga)
And ok I did not realize the lack of penalties, I just learned 4e

So I am thinking the following power source
Charka.
The charka power source allows powerful attacks, magical and otherwise, coming from your spirtual and physical powres. IT alows for three catergories of attacks, which are called jutusus
Tai: Physical attack
Gen: Illusion
Nin: everything else
and allow Bloodline abilites.
Now this time all charkra classes share many of the powers they choose.
Pargon classes, and feats, (pargon in partucalir) allow for more jutusu choices. I am thinking 3 classes and the following paragon paths

Medic (sakura)
Combat medic (forgot who)
Sharigon master (uchias)
Bjiuu master (Garra, Naruto)
Tai master (Gai, Lee)
Thrower (ten)
Gentle way fighter ( Hinta, Neji)
Beast Masters (Kiba, Shino who might be a Aburame master)
Elemental Master
Sword Master
Etc

A lot of paragon paths, are mast, meaning you need to know powers, of that type to go in. The reason is that the way jutsu are being implented, they have free regin mostly, with dm discrimated.

[Xallace]

Wait, so are we using the normal classes in addition to new classes? If not, they're all powered by "chakra" anyway, so it would be a tad redundant.

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Yeah, I guess that would be the only thing that made sense.

So the power sources would be Taijutsu (Martial), "Ninjutsu" (Magical), and Genjutsu (Illusion). What about Demon, is that available? It seems to me it would be a power source, but... that would mean there are only 9 people in the world with classes of that source... Unless most online Naruto roleplays are to be believed.

And it would break down into the same roles as regular 4E, yes? Controller, Defender, Leader, Striker.

OK, I have more suggestions for this, but for now, and idea?

Hyuuga Clan

Ability Scores: +2 Dex +2 Wis
Size: Medium (I think if they're all human, size seems a little redundant.)
Speed: 6 Squares
Vision: Normal (...sorta.)

Skill Bonuses: +2 Athletics +2 Perception
Clan Combat Tradition: Your unarmed attacks are considered weapons with a proficiency bonus of +2 and deal 1d6 points of damage. You do not provoke opportunity attacks for striking unarmed. If a class feature or other ability would grant you a higher proficiency bonus or damage, you use the better of the two.
Bloodline Release: You gain the use of the Byakugan Power.

Encounter
Standard Action / Personal
Effect: Until the end of the encounter, you ignore concealment when attacking.

...hmm, needs more for sure. Most of what I thought of would be feats later.

[Xuincherguixe]

The idea of replacing races with clans I would say is probably a good call. Since everyone is human really. Well, except the various magical animals.

The problem with Naruto, is that there's not really a lot of very strongly defined classes.

For instance would Rock Lee and Neji Hyuga the same class? What about when you throw Gai in there who has been shown to at least occasionally use Ninjutsu.

Orochimaru is another weird one (he better be!) because he's mostly a Ninjutsu user, but also Medical Ninja.

Naruto D20 addresses the problem with lots of multi classing.

And there's also the problem of that Genjutsu is kind of poorly defined. Not a whole of Genjutsu techniques used very often. More a problem with Naruto than a Naruto 4th edition mind you.

I think in order to pull it off, there would need to be a fairly common pool of Jutsu to pick from, which for the most part would replace 4th editions powers. Some of which would be restricted by bloodline. Or you need to be some kind of freak to use them.

Classes would have to be very lose. Picking one doesn't necessarily mean you can't grab other stuff too.

Or, you could just ignore classes entirely. Assume everyone picks from the same pool of abilities.

[Darksword]

Thanks for hyuga

Now Xu, what you said about classes, brought up a good point so this is my idea. All classes will have get there power from the same pool of jutusu. Certain classes, will be able to pick better jutus of a certain type. Example a fighter Nin (Charkra [tai] striker), could choose better tai jutus but at the expense of only being able to learn nin or gen (his choice), below his level. Classes will basically only define stats, combat oriented will have better hp, and such while jutsu based classes will have features to allow them to use their powers better. I am thinking of some optional rules that would range from allowing a basic regular game, with defined class, just using charakra power source, to a full out naruto game.
So back to jutsu, yay they will mostly be from the same source, but some feats paragon paths etc, would allow others, because it shows, special training above the norm. They would also cover bloodline abilities. Also some jutsus, might a have requirements to learn them
Now the demons are tricky. They are most defiantly not deserving of their own. I guess it is possible. It would explain why naruto could not master basic jutsus, because he did not get them because he got demon powers instead. The class would have access to the jutsu pool, and would have access to its own pool of powers. That would also be nice because we would not have to make powers for each of the nine beasts. They would get jipped of a few class features. May be one class feature most ninjas get gives them cantrips like jtusu (basic at will powers, like bushin, and substitution), but a demon ninja would not. We could make demons bearers a race (called the bjuuin, spelling might be off), and then there powers would be improved by feats, and paragon paths.
Finally my least favorite idea is a template. It would require making up la rules, and could be a problem waiting to happed.

SO now I leave u with a gift, a new feat. And I believe that you do not need a scroll to perform the jutsu but I am not positive.

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Kuchiyose no Jutsu HeroicPre: must have made a pack with a summon animal. Must meet prerequisites for the summon. Evel 5
Benefit: You can use Heroic Kuchiyose no Jutsu encounter power.

Kuchiyose no Jutsu Heroic Nin feat power
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You focus all your energy against the ground as you wipe your blood across it. And then a beast appeared to fight for you.
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Encounter*Summoning, Ninjutsu
Full action Range: adjacent to you (most have rooms to fit the summon)
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Effect: You summon a summon beast, of your pact, that is in the heroic teir)
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Rules about summoning
These are the basic rules, unless a feat, power etc says otherwise.
You can control a number of summon creatures equal to1/2 your level (minimum one).
A summon fights freely, you can give it a command as a minor action but it wont have to listen. You need to gain a summons trust usually.
Certain powers, allow combination attacks with summons.
In battle you can control up to your level +2 levels of summons. So a level 7 can control, any three summons, whose total level is no more than 9.
A single summon can have no more than 2 less levels than you. So using the same example, the max level of a summon for him is 5. This can be changed for story purposes, like when Naruto Summoned Gambunto, an epic level frog summon.

Also what about class features?

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Aburame Clan
Scores: + 2wis, +2 int
Speed: 5
Vison: Normal (low light???)

Insect Fighter: Because of their obsession with insects, the aburame clan, gets a +1 on all rolls against insects, or about knowledge of insects
Bug Host; Poison Immunity: Because of their unique metabolism, they get from being a host, Aburame clan members, get a +1 on defense and saves against poison.
Bug Host: The aburame clan has a unique ability. They house bugs inside their body. They can use these bugs to fight, for them. At level one they have one small heroic kika clan. Every five levels they gain an adtional heroic kika clan, but they can get better clans through feats, and powers. At level 15 they get one additional small paragon swarm, and at level 25 an additional small epic swarm. Any time, a swarm is reduced to 0 hp, it can not be used until the host gets a full night rest.
Kika Parasite: BEcause of the nature of the bugs, an Aburame takes -1 on con each night. If they get a good night sleep, and good nutrients, they could stop this penalty from increase by -1. A healing jutus can decrease the penalty by +1, for every 10 hp restores, but it can never go above -1.
Kika Summon: An Aburame clan host can use Kika Summon as an encounter power.

The power will be posted later.

[Sanguine]

I think Con would be a good bonus for Aburame. After all the bugs feed on there Chakra so they have to have a lot. Although this is based around my interpretation of how the ability scores would work in Naruto.

Edit: About the Bjiuu I would make it a feat you have to take at first level. instead of getting your "Cantrips"(Transform, Clone, Substitution) you would get the ability to once a day recharge an encounter power due to massive chakra. Then there would be more feats for when you uncover more of your Bjiuu abilities. Possibly including one that gives you the "Cantrips".

[Ninetail]

I think you're better off using a system such as HERO or Mutants & Masterminds. Here's why:

* Everyone is human. Well, Naruto and a few others might be considered a different "race" due to their bound demons, but there's no real point to races otherwise. You can use them for clans, as you suggest (and as Rokugan did in 3e), but that leads to the next problem.

* Everyone is the same class, more or less. Sure, they have different powers, but some of those are clan-based (and if you make clans into race, then you can't make them into classes), and the rest are all "ninja techniques" of one sort or another. There's a wide variety, but they're all under the same umbrella. It's just a matter of which techniques a given ninja specializes in.

* D&D, as a system that separates abilities based on race and (more prominently) class, doesn't really suit this paradigm. You can make it work, but it will take a lot of effort.

* On the other hand, a point-buy system suits it perfectly: Everyone begins from the same base point (ninja trainee, or whatever). You can develop a few "packages" of pre-set powers to represent a given clan, perhaps at a slight discount to encourage their use. Then each player can assign their points to specific powers he wishes to specialize in.

[Darksword]

please I hate those type of comments. There has been a lot sytem even a 3.5 that does not matter. We are trying to make a conversion because we want to. nuff said.

and about demons, I am not sure that a mere feat(s) would do the trick. A that could realy tip the balance of the game.
And I actualy interpeted the feed off con differently. Feeding off charkra decrease con.

[Sanguine]

and about demons, I am not sure that a mere feat(s) would do the trick. A that could realy tip the balance of the game.

True enough, but the only other option that really fits is a race or a class. And it seems a lot more believable to me that only a handful of people have a certain feat(s) then that only a handful of people have a certain race or class. Of course it would be completely up to a GM who can and can't take said feat(s) just like leadership. You could also rule that only NPCs can use the feat(s). Just an Idea I thought I would throw out there.

Edit:Fair enough about the Aburames, maybe a bonus to Cha as they exert there influence over the bugs?

[Xallace]

*Classes Explained*

Ok, so we have one pool of powers fo' everybody, classes provide the Defense Bonuses, HP, Healing Surges, Proficiencies, and each get their own class features. OK, I can dig that.

So back to jutsu, yay they will mostly be from the same source, but some feats paragon paths etc, would allow others, because it shows, special training above the norm. They would also cover bloodline abilities. Also some jutsus, might a have requirements to learn them

I'm having some trouble understanding the bolded.

Now the demons are tricky. They are most defiantly not deserving of their own. I guess it is possible. It would explain why naruto could not master basic jutsus, because he did not get them because he got demon powers instead. The class would have access to the jutsu pool, and would have access to its own pool of powers. That would also be nice because we would not have to make powers for each of the nine beasts. They would get jipped of a few class features. May be one class feature most ninjas get gives them cantrips like jtusu (basic at will powers, like bushin, and substitution), but a demon ninja would not. We could make demons bearers a race (called the bjuuin, spelling might be off), and then there powers would be improved by feats, and paragon paths.

I dunno about this. I'd suggest demons as being like multi-class feats; more powerful than normal, but restricted in that you can't take more than one (and now you can't take multi-class feats!). Make a couple chains of feats that let you replace one known power with a "demon" power. Paragon Path or two focused around the demon, and then maybe an epic destiny devoted to full manifestation.

Aburame Clan
Scores: + 2wis, +2???
Speed: 6
Vison: Normal (low light???)

I agree with +2 Con. Maybe speed 5? I don't remember the buggy folk being particularly fast.

It's a good start, but it needs some work.
The biggest problem, if I recall, is that the Aburame can not use regular techs because of the bugs- in exchange, they gain special insect techs that only they can use. I doubt it stops them from using Taijutsu, but that means that a whole 2/3 of the powers are unavailable to an Aburame character.

Scratch that, I appear to have made it up completely.

[Darksword]

Alright the bold part about jutsu. What I am saying that jutsu come from one big pool, but some jutsu must be learned by feats or pargagon paths.

Now I like the idea, of demons being multiclass feats. That would work.

And now what about classes, and class features. My idea for the classes is first that since having them as just charka power source would be stupid, so each also have one of the three jutsu type.

Fighter nin (Tai Striker, like Sasuke, and lee, speed and strength)
Jutsu Nin (Nin Controler, Like KAkashi, some one who has a lot of jutsu)
Gurdain Nin (Tai Defender, big ninja with a lot strength and endurance, chouji, Naruto)
Supporter Ninja (Nin (or Gen), Leader, Healers, and may illusionist, ino and Saukra)
Strategist (Nin leader, a planner, who gives great advice, like Shikumaru and Temeri)
// My idea on the strategist is that Shikumaru has not shown many jutsu, so his other powers are these.

So the next step would be choosing class features. They should be easily moldable, and not character defineing. I am thinking things like sneak attack, allowing the use of healing surge and etc.

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Uchia Clan
Scores: +2 Str, +2 dex (or wis or somthin)
Speed: 7 Squares
Vision: Normal

Uchia Bloody battler: When ever you are bloodied, or fighting a bloodied foe, you get a +1 bonus on attack.
Fire Masters: The Uchia clan our masters of fire. They get +1 to attack and damage on all fire jutsu.
Goukakyuu no Jutsu - Great Fireball Technique: A uchia can use Goukakyuu no Jutsu - Great Fireball Technique as an encounter power.


Goukakyuu no Jutsu - Great Fireball Technique Uchia Clan power
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As you open your mouth with a roar, the deadly power of your
draconic kin blasts forth to engulf your foes.
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Encounter * Fire,
move Action Close blast 4
Targets: All creatures in area
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Attack: Wisdom + 2 vs. Reflex
Hit: 1d8 + Constitution modifier damage.
Increase to +4 bonus and 2d 8+ Constitution modifier
damage at 11th level, and to +6 bonus and 3d8 +
Constitution modifier damage at 21st level.

[Ninetail]

please I hate those type of comments.

Then don't ask for feedback.

We are trying to make a conversion

No, you're trying to make a whole new system which bears a vague resemblance to 4e. That was my whole point.

4e doesn't have negative racial modifiers. 4e doesn't have odd-numbered ability modifiers (neither did 3e for that matter). 4e doesn't have full-round actions.

If you feel the need to have any of this, you should be asking whether 4e is really the system you want.

[Darksword]

actualy, a lot of this stuff (full round action etc, ) I did not know that stuff about 4e.

[Darksword]

do not want to bump, but I have some stuff that I feel deserves its own post. The start of the list of jutsu (in no order)

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Daibakuryuu no Jutsu - Great Exploding Current nin attack 6
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After doing the needed hand seals a vortex of water will form, sucking your foes on the surface above it down to the depths below.
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Utility*nin,Suton (Water)
Standard action Range: 10 squares
Target: One square of deep water.
Dc: (see below), +wis
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Effect: You createa a 4 by 4 whirlpool. Any creature in the water, within 5 squares, must make a athletic check vs dc or be moved into the whirlpool. Any creature who begins their turn within the whirlwind must make a swim check v.s dc or be sucked into the whirlpool. (See DM guide).
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Sustain: The whirlpool, normally disperse after one round. How ever you can sustain it as an standard action. After skipping sustaining for one round the whirlpool is gone.
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Domu - Earth Spear nin attack 17
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After using your hand sign your body becomes hard and rock like. How ever more importantly your hands become a deadly weapon.
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Encounter*Doton (Earth)
Standard Action Personal
Target: Your self
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Effect: For the remainder of the encounter your body becomes hard and stone like. You get a +6 on AC, and Fort defenses, a +2 on will and ref, and 5 temporary hit points. Finally you can use your unarmed attack as a +5 weapon (damage; 1d8+str).
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Doro Gaeshi - Mud Overturn nin utility 6_________________________________________________ _________
After performing your special hand signs, you “pull” a giant wall of earth right in front of you.
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utility*Doton (Earth)
Standard Action Range: Adjacent
Target: A square of earth
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You create a wall infront of you, 5 squares wide, 1 thick, and 15 high. It can not be Brocken like normal doors, and it has 50 hp, and regerates, 10 a round. It provides total cover and all area and burst attacks stop at the wall.
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Doryuu Taiga - Earth Flow River Nin utiltiy2
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At will* Doton (earth)
Standard Action Aera burst 4 within 3
Target: Any square
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The effected area become muddy for four rounds. (see dm and phb for information on diffuclt terrain.). It is possible to sink in the mud. (????)
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Kami Shuriken - Paper Shuriken nin attack 1
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At will*nin
Standard Action Range: 10 Squares (+benefit or penalty)
Target: one creature
Attack: Attack v.s AC
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Hit: 1d4+str (benefit or penalty) against foe and make a secondary attack
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Secondary Attack: Str v.s Fortitude defense
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Hit: 1 ongoing damage (save ends)
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Kaze no Yaiba - Sword of Wind nin attack 15
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After forming the needed hand seal, a cutting whirlwind will envelop his opponent and cut them to pieces. Unlike a real sword which can face resistance, the wind blade will be able to slice with little difficulty.
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Daily*Nin, Futton
Standard Action Range: 5 squares
Target: One creature
Attack: Wisdom V.S Ref (or Def????)
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Hit: 5d10+wis mod damage. The target also takes 5 continuous damage.
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Kanashibari no Jutsu Temporary Body Paralysis Technique nin attack 9
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Daily*Nin
Standard action Aera burst 20 within
Attack: Wisdom or int +1/4level v.s fort defense
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Hit: All targets who are hit are stunned. They can get out of the being stunned by succeeding on their save but they take -5 on it. Otherwise it wears off after ten rounds.

[Sanguine]

Here is a rough idea for the non-clan ninja.(Feel free to ignore it if you just want regular human instead.) Tell me what you think.

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Shinobi

Scores: +2 Dex +2 Wis
Speed: 6
Vision: Normal

Hard Work:Through your intense study to catch up to the "genuises" you have gained more versatility. You gain one extra at-will jutsu. At first level

Focus: Due to the grueling training you have put yourself through your will is strengthened. You gain +2 racial bonus to your will defense.

[Darksword]

I think that it would be allow. What do you think of the jutsu so far. I am working on a couple more to.

[Sanguine]

Not quite sure what you mean by "I think that it would be allow" could you explain?

As far as the jutsus go I think they are interesting, but with the earth spear shouldn't the plus five also go to damage? Edit:That may be overpowered though.

[Darksword]

I meant I think I that the shinobi race would be alright, but so would the human go.
And for the earth spear. I think i i will make that change, but change the level. Also Most of those are becoming utilty powers.

[Sanguine]

Thought I would try my hand at the Inuzuka clan.

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Inuzuka Clan

Scores: +2 Str +2 Con(or maybe Dex)

Speed: 7

Vision: Normal(lowlight maybe?)

Animal Tactics: You fight with the ferocity of your bast brethren. You get a +2 racial bonus to damage rolls vs. bloodied opponents.

Dog companion: You have a dog you have been entrusted to train. At first level you get a small dog that fights besid you, it becomes more powerful as you level up. (Maybe should be a feat?)

[Darksword]

I think the increasing in the dogs level should primary be handled by feats and paragon path, but I like it, and the compion should not be to unbalance so I say it is good. Also I just edited the jutsu list with a couple more.

[Sanguine]

I think the jutsus are good, for a second I thought the wind sword should target AC but then it shouldn't be affected by armor so Ref defense is good. As for the dog leveling with you it would primarily be bonuses to hit/defenses and more hp, the other stuff would come from feats/paragon paths like more damage and higher ability scores. Basically just keeping it useful at the higher level without focusing on it.

[Darksword]

yay that would work, well. Simalar to how racail powers work.

Also here is a new feats. The first two level of the sharingon.

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Bloodline: Sharingan (single TOma) [Racial,HEroic]
Pre: Uchia Clan, level 3+
Effect: You can activate the sharingan, encounter power. The listed effects of the sharingon are just the beginning. Certain feats will give more benefits when ever the power is activated and some jutsu can only be used when the Sharingon is activated.

Sharingan—Copy Wheel Uchia clan racial feat power
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With a flick of an eye, your eye becomes red, with black dot, and one weird windmill.
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Minor action personal
Target: Your self
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Effect: You get +2 on all attacks rolls, on defense, and damage rolls. Also once per round you can get an additional +1 on any roll, or against any roll. (2/1)

Bloodline: two Toma (Racail,Heroic)
Pre: Uchia clan, sharingan, level 5
Effect: Your sharingon becomes +4/+2. In addition you can see invisible enemies, and you can tell anything you see from genjutsu or if it is real. They can also see if they are a clone, or in transformation.

[Sanguine]

yay that would work, well. Simalar to how racail powers work.

Also here is a new feats. The first two level of the sharingon.

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Bloodline: Shargingon (single TOma) [Racial,HEroic]
Pre: Uchia Clan
Effect: You can activate the sharingon, encounter power. The listed effects of the sharingon are just the beginning. Certain feats will give more benefits when ever the power is activated and some jutsu can only be used when the Sharingon is activated.

Sharinggon—Copy Wheel Uchia clan racial feat power
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With a flick of an eye, your eye becomes red, with black dot, and one weird windmill.
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Encounter*Bloodline
Minor action personal
Target: Your self
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Effect: You get +3 on all attacks rolls, on defense, and damage rolls. Also once per round you can get an additional +1 on any roll, or against any roll. (3/1)

Bloodline: two Toma (Racail,Heroic)
Pre: Uchia clan, Sharingon
Effect: Your sharingon becomes +5/+3. In addition you can see invisible enemies, and you can tell anything you see from genjutsu or if it is real. They can also see if they are a clone, or in transformation.

I would give the second one a level requirement, and I would also make it 2/1 and 4/2. Just to keep it from being overpowered, although depending on the power level of the other feats it may be okay.

Edit: Also when does this take place? Before the Naruto story, during it, during Shippuden, what?

[The Dark Fiddler]

Minor nitpick; it is spelled Sharingan.

[Sanguine]

Minor nitpick; it is spelled Sharingan.

Thank you, I've been wanting to say that for a while.

[Darksword]

realy its sharingan, never knew. SO for a level requirement what do you think, like 7 or 5. And I will take the number suggestion.

And what do you mean when does this take place.
Any way puppetering stuff. A basic combat puppet stats will come eventualy.

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Kugutsu no Jutsu - Puppetry Technique nin attack 1
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Encounter*nin, puppet
Standard action one square
Target: A combat puppet
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You animate a puppet with one level, you can not use any component of it, and you must give it an action to have it use the same type of action. (move to make it move etc)

Notes on puppet: Unless otherwise said you can animate a puppet with one level.
You can control one puppet
A puppet can be up to your level-5 (minum one).
You can control a total amount of puppet levels equal to your level-4.


Puppeteer (Heroic)
Pre: Puppetry technique
Effect: You can use puppets with components. (the total level of all components on a puppet can not exceed your level -2, and the total level of all components on all puppets cannot exceed your level+2. IF they do a number of levels of components would instantly fall off until they equal the amount. ) A puppet can be to your level-2. You can animate one additional level.

Improved Puppeteering (Heroic)
Pre: Puppetry tech, Puppeteer
Effect: You can animate a puppet with two more levels. Can animate 2 more levels of components above the norm.
Note: can be taken multiple times, effect stack.

[Sanguine]

What I mean is, what is the time frame we are basing it off of. Like unless it takes place before the anime/manga there is no point in statting out the Kaguya Clan. Really just a minor thing but it would help with my creativity. As for the Sharingan I would say level seven for the second one seems good.

[Darksword]

I am basing it off the full series, so players could play a kayuga if they want. Speaking of which anyone want to do that. CLan I am having a bit of "Staters block"