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2010-02-04, 10:11 PM (ISO 8601)
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Rate my DMing
Alright this isn't an actual game at all.. I just want to know if people think I'm good at weaving any type of story.
Campaign 1: Kobold
"Many generations ago your great ancestors lived in peace and ignorance. Never did the idea of an apocalyptic day come to mind until one day from the darkness came four demonic beings claded in steel. Each one was different from the last and each one had the capabilities to destroy many of our people as quickly as a few moments. Many of our kin gave their lives to give our people enough time to escape the horrid slaughter. Our people wondered for days in search for a new place to call home. One day they found a small island with a large plateau off the cost that had a path to it during the low tides. Once settled there for a few years, our people discovered some thing great. Underneath the surface was an ancient system of tunnels which lead to inside of the plateau of the island to a large empty area withing the great plateau. This gave more security to our clan and would eventually be found out to have many precious minerals and ore even deeper into the earth (which later on we would trade with cities far away.) It is many generations later and you and your teams are assigned the sacred duty of protecting the entrance to our utopia and our people."
Yea so if it's THAT bad I`ll just leave the site and come back one day under a different name and pretend I'm into Exalted or some thing..
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2010-02-04, 10:16 PM (ISO 8601)
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2010-02-04, 10:28 PM (ISO 8601)
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An intricate campaign backstory has nothing to do with your skills at DMing.
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2010-02-04, 10:29 PM (ISO 8601)
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You said "our people" too much.
It was fine. Deadly beings come up, kobolds who aren't dragonwrought sorcerers are scared...etc.Homebrew
Please feel free to PM me any thoughts on my homebrew (or comment in the thread if it's not too old).
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2010-02-04, 10:31 PM (ISO 8601)
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Oh.. Well that makes me feel better.
Ah- Actually you have a good point.. I can't exactly think of how to show any DMing skill that I have or would have without actually running a game...
I probably should replace "People" with "Clan." My favorite part was trying to make some random adventures look like an ApocalypseLast edited by Vulkan; 2010-02-04 at 10:33 PM.
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2010-02-04, 11:48 PM (ISO 8601)
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The story is not bad, but the grammar and spelling are in need of significant editing. (Which is not an utterly horrific thing in and of itself; truly awesome work typically needs three rounds of editing to be suitable for fansites and the like.)
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2010-02-04, 11:53 PM (ISO 8601)
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Quick question... are your PCs going to actually... care? I mean, it sounds mean, but if you've ever read The DM of the Rings, a lot of times the players just want to stab a bunch of things. It's good to have some loose plot, but...
I guess what it really comes down to is a few things.
Are your PCs excessively rebellious? They may not enjoy being told what to do.
Are your PCs going to invest themselves in the backstory? Yes, it's good for building characters, but that is just one style of play. So... is it your style of play?
Where are you going from there? That's a good backstory, but do you have plans for what happens next?
Lore is really nice in a world, especially if it comes up. Believe you me, though, without a guiding hand, lore you prepared rarely comes up.
As for the lore itself... it's cool. I like it. Good work.But... but... You can't Wake Up Dead
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2010-02-04, 11:54 PM (ISO 8601)
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Homebrew
Please feel free to PM me any thoughts on my homebrew (or comment in the thread if it's not too old).
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2010-02-05, 12:04 AM (ISO 8601)
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... aaaw man
Well one of them absolutely loves kobolds and the other one is the normal DM and probably would like to annoy me going "I want to search for traps" which would be ironic since I'm not the one who does it to him..
How ever I'm glad you like the lore I came up with.
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2010-02-05, 12:47 AM (ISO 8601)
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Well, see:
"typically needs"
That most such generally gets no rounds of editing . . . QED.
Everything needs to be edited.
Every author needs to be edited.
Anything I write I review multiple times, and do what I can to pass it by someone else for checking. I hate when I have to go to posting without having someone look over my work as I know it means there will be even more errors in it.
Otherwise you get what Temotei221 noted.
As a side note, it is also okay to hate your editor, and even say mean things about him in public. But always have one, and always make sure to keep him happy. (Especially if it is yourself when working on a purely personal/fansite basis. )
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2010-02-05, 03:55 AM (ISO 8601)
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An intricate campaign backstory has nothing to do with your skills at DMing.
But the question is usually how well you can interweave your backstory with the actual occurences in game, but it is hardly damaging to have an interesting plot, while a dull or stupid campaign setting is a major drawback in any case.
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2010-02-05, 04:51 AM (ISO 8601)
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An introduction to the world is needed to move in it, and a background for a home setting is the basis, if you want to make the players interested in the campaign.
If player are not interested at least a little in such things, better to play a serie of Dungeon Delve. "you are at the entry of the cave; roll initiative".
I hope you're not implying that Vulcan's was intricated...
(BTW, I like it)Last edited by Killer Angel; 2010-02-05 at 04:56 AM.
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2010-02-05, 05:26 AM (ISO 8601)
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It sounds like a cool pitch for a game. I have a clear idea of who the characters are and what it is they'll actually be doing, which is better than most game pitches.
But yeah - it says nothing about your DMing. The best way of telling that would be to see if your players are enjoying what you're doing.
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2010-02-05, 05:34 AM (ISO 8601)
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With respect to the writing, it's first-draft material, and there's nothing wrong with that.
With respect to the story, I'm not sure I'm qualified to comment since I've never DM'd and have only actually played a couple of times, but...the assigned duty of 'guarding the gate' sounds a little passive for a group of adventurers. IMHO, giving them something a little more active and open-ended (e.g. patrolling the area *around* the gate) would be an improvement.
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2010-02-05, 08:32 AM (ISO 8601)
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Well, meta-thinking a little, guarding the gate will probably entail something big and nasty showing up, not being stopped due to sheer big-and-nastiness, killing/destroying/stealing stuff and then leaving so that the PCs have to chase it down to avenge/avenge/recover stuff.
Or something will come from inside (it's Underdarkish tunnels we are talking about) and the PCs will have to deal with that.
What I mean is: guarding duty is fine (as a plot device) to start with, as long as it's shaken up after a while."When you find yourself sinking into Madness, dive." Malkavian proverb
"From the tiny egg the great wyrm grows." Kobold proverb
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2010-02-05, 08:59 AM (ISO 8601)
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Hmm... perhaps intricate was the wrong word. I only meant that it was very detailed and covered a timespan of several generations.
Anyway, my point was that having a detailed campaign background is one thing (and not unimportant at all), but it doesn't give any evidence about one's ability to convey that story meaningfully, manage the players, or control the overall flow of the game at the table.
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2010-02-05, 09:33 AM (ISO 8601)
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I'd play in your game. I have a soft spot for low level monsters and playing the game from an alternative perspective sounds exciting. As a tip, check out this webcomic if you're not already familiar with: http://goblins.keenspot.com/. It's about a goblin adventuring party.
As others have pointed out, it's hard to judge how good a DM you are just by the backstory. I think it's a good sign that you want feedback and criticism, means you're willing to see what might be wrong with your style and want to improve.Last edited by Hiisi; 2010-02-05 at 09:34 AM.
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2010-02-05, 09:57 AM (ISO 8601)
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Gotcha.. I`ll find an editor.. Eventually.
Thank you Ive been fascinated with the concept of campaigns from the perspective of the npc monsters since my friends and I killed like 50 kobolds..
Looks like it's time to fire up the OpenRpg then, eh?
Thank you very much.. Actually now that I think about it if I make a few tweaks I can actually set this up to work on the forums here.
Actually that was the original plan was to have them going around setting up traps hiding and pro-trolling to see if any one would wonder in and then eventually have them do more important things such as venture into ruins that were found and eventually go on a trade run and eventually doing "THE PILGRIMAGE." Which I have a little plot twist for that.
I think my main problem is I need my PC's characters ahead of time in order to come up with things such as meeting and why it is their there and not digging and such.
Yeah I find the current DM in my group... To be listed as the following
Evil
Sadistic
Boring
Unimaginative
Too eager for high level campaigns despite never finishing a low level one
Etc
Thank you very much for the web comic I enjoy these.Last edited by Vulkan; 2010-02-05 at 10:09 AM.
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2010-02-05, 10:03 AM (ISO 8601)
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What bothers me is that this is YOUR story and a good DM does not make the story. The players make the story.
A good DM will ask the players what sort of game they want to play and then build the story around that.
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Thank you Ive been fascinated with the concept of campaigns from the perspective of the npc monsters since my friends and I killed like 50 kobolds..
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2010-02-05, 10:07 AM (ISO 8601)
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2010-02-05, 10:14 AM (ISO 8601)
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2010-02-05, 10:21 AM (ISO 8601)
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It's a decent background bit. A little dry...but thats hard to avoid when setting up all the fluff. Just dont be concerned if players skim it.
Just expand on this, toss plot hooks everywhere, and try to think of 1-2 epic events that might intermesh with the adventure.
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2010-02-05, 11:23 AM (ISO 8601)
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What bothers me is that this is YOUR story and a good DM does not make the story. The players make the story.
The other problem is, that this form of gamemastering strongly suggests that the whole world turns around the players and their characters. This might be nice for their egos, but is usually poison for any campaign.
I know pretty well what I can do, and what things I can't pull of as a GM - and most importantly I know that when I do most of the work to pull the game of, I am not going to put this effort in any idea I have no particular interest in, or worse, is forced on me by the volonté général. As the campaign's quality usually depends greatly on the invested work and tought, the result would be mediocre at best.
A good DM will ask the players what sort of game they want to play and then build the story around that.
And if a player is not content with this, he is invited to run a game on his own.
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2010-02-05, 11:43 AM (ISO 8601)
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2010-02-05, 11:50 AM (ISO 8601)
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I disagree with you Satyr. Strongly.
In my opinion you just outlined if the most common error in DMing where the DM thinks everything revolves around them. This quickly leads to Railroading where the PC's are simply bystanders to the DM's grand story and the game quickly turns into something like this. Where the DM perfectly convinced what they're doing is great but can't seem to grasp why no one else seems to care.
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The back story tailored to what the players want? So I should ask if its cool that the BIG SECRET of this campaign world is that the good god xyz is in fact evil and wants to destroy the multiverse?
What the DM needs to do there is start making quests that involve hunting down rare and interesting spiders.
If you player makes a diplomat character and convinces the group to do political spying, sabotage and intrigue against the surrounding kingdoms then the backstory better have a lot to do with the current tensions between kingdoms X and Y and their attempts to gain allies.Last edited by Megaduck; 2010-02-05 at 12:00 PM.
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2010-02-05, 12:09 PM (ISO 8601)
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You do confuse back story with story
And it is perfectly fine if they want to hunt spiders or do anything they want ^^
the back story of the campaign setting is nothing that prohibits the players to do whatever they want. It defines your campaign world how came the world into being, what gods are there, population, kingdoms, tribes, races etc etc. it makes any campaign richer and much more interesting.
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2010-02-05, 12:16 PM (ISO 8601)
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2010-02-05, 06:44 PM (ISO 8601)
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Originally Posted by Megaduck
This quickly leads to Railroading where the PC's are simply bystanders to the DM's grand story [...].
I don't say that your position is not legit for you, but it is certainly not a universal truth, and I personally couldn't run a game like that very well, nor would I enjoy it as a player. It is one thing to have an own philosophy, it is something completely different to claim that the personal taste is the one true way.
Originally Posted by Tyndmyr
In my opinion, the game as a whole rises and falls with the gamemaster. Sure, every player can contribute (participation is the absolute minimum what can be expected), and every player can ruin a game if he or she truly tries (or just doesn't care), but it is the gamemaster who does most of the heavy lifting and constitures the framework, and it is also the gamemaster's fault when he lets a player ruin the game, or doesn't create the chances of other people to contribute. Therefore I really think that any limitations for the gamemasters are a problem - the better he can fulfill his role, the higher are the chances that the campaign will become something good.
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2010-02-05, 07:27 PM (ISO 8601)
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Well, since this has turned into a "How much power does/should the DM have?" thing, I think I'll put in my 2 cp.
In my opinion (being a somewhat minimalist DM with a chaotic player base), my primary purpose is to fill in what the PCs ask for, and when they don't ask for anything, to give them options. This is fun for them, because it's like they are existing in a world where they can do whatever they want, and reasonable reactions will follow. When they get bored, I twist it up. When I get bored, I do something weird.
Then again, I never pay for anything, but end up eating a lot anyway.But... but... You can't Wake Up Dead
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