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    Sweet, that was fast.

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    Well, that settles it.

    When you try 3 times to update a story and three times, something happens to make use lose everything you've written down, its time to call it a day.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Silverraptor View Post
    Well, that settles it.

    When you try 3 times to update a story and three times, something happens to make use lose everything you've written down, its time to call it a day.
    Ouch. Sorry.
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    Ouch. Are you writing it in the post, or on a word processor?

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    ouch, at least its not somthing more importent, like an essey of some sort.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Lateral View Post
    Ouch. Are you writing it in the post, or on a word processor?
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    Yeah, I'd reccomend writing it in a word processor. Have had some long posts fail on me; and after that I just started writing any important/long posts in Word.

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    I usually copy to a word processor as I'm writing myself.
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    I'd just copy it periodically as you're writing it in a post. Then, if you lose it, you can just paste it back on.
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    I didn't realize chapter 2 was up till about half an hour ago, anyway in part 7 it says aside twice in a sentence when it shouldn't-'if we could put aside your interest in unique architecture aside for a moment'
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    Almost two weeks since last post, so its not thread threadomancy.


    What happend? the thread reached page 2 on thread list!
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    Dude, you're overreacting. We're all waiting for Silverraptor to post the next chapter.

    Although, I wonder why it's not up yet? He said he was typing it up and losing it a couple weeks ago.

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    This is most unsettling. I am in great fear. If this were to die I would fast for two weeks and scourge myself.
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    Ya. I wonder what would've caused it. Its not as if finals are happening right now.
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    Ah, I forgot. My finals aren't for a few weeks, so...

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    Ah, I forgot. My finals aren't for a few weeks, so...
    Understandable. Finals times aren't standardize, so everyone has them at different times.
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    Understandable. Finals times aren't standardize, so everyone has them at different times.
    Especially in different countries all over the world.
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    Oh Silver dear, at this rate I'm gonna be blushing as much as viola. Silly romance.

    By the way, whatever happened to that side story someone was writing.
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    Oh Silver dear, at this rate I'm gonna be blushing as much as viola. Silly romance.

    By the way, whatever happened to that side story someone was writing.
    Did you just notice part 9 now?

    And that was Saint Nil. No idea what happened to him.
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    Did you just notice part 9 now?

    And that was Saint Nil. No idea what happened to him.
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    I just found this from Silv's Sig, and I love it. Great writing, and I love how you add in characters from people's ideas of themselves. I would like to get in on that as well. My character would be a Bard or a Sorcerer who seems completely insane, but usually ends up manipulating people, either for good or for his own purposes, depending on if you want a villian or a good-guy. Somewhat like Dumbledore, except younger and less tragic and more musical. As for names, he would call himself "OOHHHMMM" like Buddhist monks, but his real name would be Ome. If someone misspoke his name, he would either show up in person, or a sign would appear correcting the mistake. And yes, I would enjoy being a comic character.

    Also, I have part names, starting from where they leave off in the first section.

    33. A New Challenger Appears
    34. Cold Hearted
    35. New Happenings
    36. Give her Liberty, or Give me Death
    37. From the Claws of Defeat
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    39. Aftermath and Preparations
    40. A Penny-Saved
    41. A Change in Plans
    42. Grim Reaping
    43. Dusk Approaches
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    47. Life Lives on
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    4. Anger leads to Hate
    5. A Bad Memory
    6. Bedside Manner
    7. Spun Around
    8. Making Evil Plans
    9. Wake-up call
    I have returned, and plan on focusing on world-building. Issues are being dealt with.

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    Nice job on those titles.
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    What can I say, I like references and puns, and I felt like contributing in return for eventual inclusion in the story.
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    Ill need to go over those names again later. But welcome.
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    Sunlight was making its way across the room as the morning progressed. Viola was looking over at the flowers that Kurama had brought her. They were ruffled up and missing some pedals caused by her reactionary shockwave that she blasted Kurama with.

    She thought about Kurama and how much he cared for her. No one in her life had shown this much attention to her. Her eyes shifted to the windows where the sun was crawling its way high into the sky. Down below she could hear the other paladins still working on rebuilding the fortress. Kurama was among them, working hard with everyone else. And all this time, she was sitting up here.

    She couldn't stand it anymore. She was not going to be on the sidelines while everyone else was working hard. She took a deep breath, gritted her teeth, and slowly pulled her way up into a sitting position. She hissed as the pain tried to bring her back down, but this time she was determined to beat it. Turning slightly, she pressed her bare foot onto the stone floor. She paused to take some several steadying breaths before she continued with the other foot. After sitting on the edge of the bed for the first time since her injury, Viola was ready to finally leave her cushion prison.

    She arced her back as she pushed her way up from the bed. Instantly, the pain shot up again in protest. It was almost as if the pain knew she was trying to leave the confines of the bed and was making its last stand. It was a war of wills as Viola fought and struggled to stand up, until she felt the bed withdraw from under her. She pressed her hand down on the nightstand and she looked down. The feeling of being able to stand on her own two feet again was indescribable emotion. She felt the early development of tears forming from this joy before she quickly wiped them away. She had only completed half the battle, the other half was making her way down to the training grounds. She didn't know what she could do, but she was going to do something. Anything to help in rebuilding the academy. And she wasn't going to take no for an answer.

    She grabbed her crystal and pocketed it. She then leaned over and braced herself on the wall. Carefully, she placed one foot in front of the other, wincing as pain lances up with each step. Finally, she reached the door and took hold of the handle. Suddenly, her will faltered. How was she going to get all the way down to the training grounds? She couldn't crawl along the wall the entire way.

    She sighed heavily with despair. Her fingers were slipping away from the rung one by one. She then stopped, with her middle finger just barely touching handle. She wanted to look out into the hallway again. See it with her eyes and not with her sound sense. She braced herself as she pulled the door open. It creaked as she looked out into the hall. She smiled, knowing that she could come this far.

    Something in the corner of her eye caused her to turn. Leaning against the wall beside the door was a crutch that was the perfect height for her. On the top was a note attached it elegant curved writing.

    "I thought you would try and make your leave today. It pleases me that you are feeling better. I welcome the sight of seeing you under the sun with us all once again."

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    Viola smiled, emotions of happiness flooding through her. She pocketed the note and took hold of the crutch. She carefully tried it out for a few steps before readying herself to continue onward. Every other step was accompanied with a loud *Thump*.
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    Its been a while, but I finally done it. I'm over at the scout camp and the first week has been really hectic. Finally got the time to finish writing this.

    I also realized that I was trying to blend too much together into one part. It was making everything sound corny and rushed. So I split this one part into several different parts with their own focus. It may take a little longer to move the story along, but it will be included with more and better detail.

    Anyways, lets hope I can keep this up.
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    Yay, I make another appearance! With a handwritten note to Viola, no less!
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    Hooray! New Part!
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    Part by part, slowly progressing into the confrontation...
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    I like the emotions in that one. Two small nitpicks: There's an "b" missing at the beginning of the 5th paragraph ("grabed hold"). And at some places there were a lot of sentences following each other, that began with "She (did X)". Not bad, but somewhat inelegant. Please don't take it too negative, I'm just trying to be constructive.
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