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    Default The Legend Of The Blue-Footed Booby!

    Here is my first Webcomic on the origin of my avatar. This all started when Introbulus spontaneously PM's me with a short story, that is now the text in comic #1. Thank you!

    Comic 1: (The Legend Begins)
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    Comic 2 (The journey PT.1)
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    ukeleleninja is a natural avatarist with his own style so early in his plagrounding career. I'm a little jealous, actually.

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    Thanks Introbulus for the text (see image url)!

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    Booby!
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    Uhm... if he tossed the book away, how could he peruse it later?

    (yeah, I know, picky detail)

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    Default Re: The Legend Of The Blue-Footed Booby!

    Lots of tiny text in a swirly font. >_>

    First thing i'd recommend is either scaling it up and/or changing to something less... well, swirly.

    (Can't comment on the content due to, well, you know. Art seems decent, though.)
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    really good art. storyline has caught me cuz, duh! Boobies. But I have one question, how is the art so good? Mine seems bad and I think its because i dont know how to shade...sooo how do I do that?
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    I like this webcomic. I used inkscape before, but all my drawings stunk.
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    really good art. storyline has caught me cuz, duh! Boobies. But I have one question, how is the art so good? Mine seems bad and I think its because i dont know how to shade...sooo how do I do that?
    Its fairly easy to get some basic shading going on. Depending on your tools it's sufficient to make a new layer, set the transparency to something like 35% and then go black on it where it should be darker. (Like, "the left side and below", as seen in this comic.)
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    Quote Originally Posted by Krüsher View Post
    really good art. storyline has caught me cuz, duh! Boobies. But I have one question, how is the art so good? Mine seems bad and I think its because i dont know how to shade...sooo how do I do that?
    Do multiple layers of shading. If you zoom in on the wing of my bird, you will notice several lines.
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    ukeleleninja is a natural avatarist with his own style so early in his plagrounding career. I'm a little jealous, actually.

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    Thanks Introbulus for the text (see image url)!

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    Shouldn't this be in Fancomics if it's not hosted off site?
    Good first page though.

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    Cool.......ninja stealth birds.
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    When's the next one coming out? Perhaps he could fight some parrot samurai or show us his awesome ninja skills?
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    Default Re: The Legend Of The Blue-Footed Booby!

    I'm not too sure If I will be able to get them out too frequently, but I'll try to get at least one soon.

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    Working on one that should be done today or tomorrow.


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    Done! Check it out.
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    Thanks Introbulus for the text (see image url)!

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    where are the eyes of te shark-thing-dude?
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    Default Re: The Legend Of The Blue-Footed Booby!

    Good question, that. (The next has a good size now. )
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    The eyes are those two line thigns I believe. You're doing a good job on the webcomic.
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    Thanks. The shark-thing actually has no eyes, and uses it's tentacules to sense movement.
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    Ah. That makes sense.
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    grammar nazi time! I think it's "burst" not bursted
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    Just to clarify, I HATE my name, it just sounded cool in my head at the time okay?

    You can just call me Kay or Kur. Easier than finding an umlaut code on the interwebz.

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    I don't like the new one quite as much as the first. It looks rather lazily done, almost copy-paste looking. Don't get me wrong, I do like everything else, I just think it could've been put together more nicely. The text could be smaller too; it was just fine in the first strip, if a little hard to read. I think it would be better in a new typeface at the old size.

    Will there be an overarching plot?
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    When's the new one comping out?
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    Nice! There should be more creativeness involving blue-footed boobies.

    This should be in the fancomic section though... but I don't know off the top of my head what mods are in charge of moving thread away from this board, or to that one.
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    It's official now. This thread is died
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