Some Heretical Exalted Stuff (PEACH)

[DrakeRaids]

First Durandal Excellency: The River of Iron is tenacious and unbreakable. He remains unbowed no matter the strength levied against his grace and speed, before striking like a storm against those who risk his ire wearing them down to nothing. Patient and thoughtful in his decision making, he will endure ages waiting for the perfect time to act, but when he does is it is decisive, swift and without hesitation. He is deeply protective, and acts as a bulwark against all those that would do harm, for as majestic as he is, he is defined by what he defends. He justifies such paradoxes as peace through violence, and acting as a champion to lost causes.

Characters may apply this charm to any action in which they fight for another, or defend an ideal, for Durandals draws his true strength from those around him. Durandals Excellency may aid also aid in attempts to perform direct and efficient actions, or careful and preciseplanning. His will is immovable; for once he has found his place none can sway him from it. This charm may assist when aiding others or when standing against immeasurable odds, however, it can never help purely selfish actions, rash or poorly thought out plans, or lies and betrayals.

Durandal Mythos Exultant: It is the nature of the Iron River to twist and turn, but never falter, no matter the opposition. The Infernal may double the DV bonus from a defensive stunt, in addition to any other rewards.

Imperfection of the Iron River: The Iron River acts in the defense of others, not himself. It is the cause he fights for that gives him strength, for he knows the truth that fighting simply for yourself leaves you hollow. Charms with the Imperfection

[Teln]

First Durandal Excellency: The River of Iron is tenacious and unbreakable. He remains unbowed no matter the strength levied against his grace and speed, before striking like a storm against those who risk his ire wearing them down to nothing. Patient and thoughtful in his decision making, he will endure ages waiting for the perfect time to act, but when he does is it is decisive, swift and without hesitation. He is deeply protective, and acts as a bulwark against all those that would do harm, for as majestic as he is, he is defined by what he defends. He justifies such paradoxes as peace through violence, and acting as a champion to lost causes.

Characters may apply this charm to any action in which they fight for another, or defend an ideal, for Durandals draws his true strength from those around him. Durandals Excellency may aid also aid in attempts to perform direct and efficient actions, or careful and preciseplanning. His will is immovable; for once he has found his place none can sway him from it. This charm may assist when aiding others or when standing against immeasurable odds, however, it can never help purely selfish actions, rash or poorly thought out plans, or lies and betrayals.

Durandal Mythos Exultant: It is the nature of the Iron River to twist and turn, but never falter, no matter the opposition. The Infernal may double the DV bonus from a defensive stunt, in addition to any other rewards.

Not bad. I might have to steal some of this if I ever get around to writing up Isidoros (unless his Excellency is in Broken Winged Crane, which I don't have yet.

Imperfection of the Iron River: The Iron River acts in the defense of others, not himself. It is the cause he fights for that gives him strength, for he knows the truth that fighting simply for yourself leaves you hollow. Charms with the Imperfection

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EDIT: Fixed the formatting.