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Thread: Uncreative backstory
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2012-05-03, 06:59 AM (ISO 8601)
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Uncreative backstory
My friends and I are trying to create a very trope filled backstory. Name some backstory tropes. Ex. Born in a small town, child prodigy, etc.
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2012-05-03, 07:15 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Uncreative backstory
An orphan, raised by an old adventurer, prophesied to save the world from some terrible evil. (This is about half the fantasy CRPGs out there.)
A farm boy, secretly the rightful heir to the realm, proven by a unique birthmark. Maybe also one heirloom (like a magic sword).
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2012-05-03, 07:29 AM (ISO 8601)
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2012-05-03, 07:42 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Uncreative backstory
Who says those are mutually exclusive?
An orphan who is secretly the rightful heir raised by an old adventurer and is prophesized to save the world from a terrible evil by claiming his rightful place as king with his definitive birthmark/heirloom.
With the help of his "adorable" comic relief sidekick Mittens the Genderless Pink Goblin, a monster who laments over the inherent evilness of hir species and only wants to make up for hir species' sins, and joined by his assistant the spunky girl who is also secretly royalty somehow and whom has an incredibly obvious crush on him that he refuses to acknowledge while simultaneously angsting about his inability to Find True Love, but will never leave his side no matter how much he abuses her.
Also he wields giant swords and walks around all day (and sleeps all night) in very tight, revealing armor that gives clear access to the sternum, yet somehow provides the same protection as full plate. The hero has also sworn out to destroy a villaind, who murdered the hero's adopted father (who taught him everything he knows about swordfighting) and whom he believes murdered the hero's father, but in reality turns out to be the hero's father. And his nephew. Insert inbreeding nobility jokes here.
I should probably stop now.
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2012-05-03, 08:36 AM (ISO 8601)
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2012-05-03, 08:11 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Uncreative backstory
Don't forget vengeance if your character isn't after vengeance for killing say their veteran adventurer father then whos going to stop that bad guy who dresses in all black
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2012-05-03, 08:25 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Uncreative backstory
Most of what needs to be covered has been covered. I'd throw in amnesia (as seen in video games, as opposed to how it actual amnesia) and some sort of locket with the picture of a family member in it - probably a younger sister, it seems traditional.
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2012-05-03, 08:26 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Uncreative backstory
I feel compelled to mention this
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2012-05-03, 09:00 PM (ISO 8601)
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2012-05-03, 09:43 PM (ISO 8601)
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I would really like to see a game made by Obryn, Kurald Galain, and Knaight from these forums.
I'm not joking one bit. I would buy the hell out of that. -- ChubbyRain
Current Design Project: Legacy, a game of masters and apprentices for two players and a GM.
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2012-05-03, 11:29 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Uncreative backstory
There's quite a difference between tropes and cliches.
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2012-05-04, 01:15 AM (ISO 8601)
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2012-05-04, 11:50 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Uncreative backstory
There's also being a noble's kid, and "rebelling" against them by running away to live as a
shotgun-hoboAdventurer.
I've seen this one far too many times for my taste. Last campaign alone, we had 3 runaway nobility and a King in the party. No, we didn't coordinate it beforehand. I don't want to see another noble-blooded adventurer ever again. (Seriously, if noble life was so awful, why would anyone do it at all?)
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2012-05-05, 01:25 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Uncreative backstory
A nobles son, who wants with all his heart to be something other than king, runs away from home to become a traveling bard. He hides his true identity from his friends, until his past catches up with him.
"Interdum feror cupidine partium magnarum Europae vincendarum"
Translation: "Sometimes I get this urge to conquer large parts of Europe."
"If you don't get those cameras out of my face, I'm gonna go 8.6 on the Richter scale with gastric emissions that'll clear this room."
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2012-05-05, 01:31 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Uncreative backstory
Don't forget they at some point met the main villain and he has a ridiculously specific trait by which to recognize, but it takes forever to find it. Probably something about having a giant scar, disfigured possibly red right hand.
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2012-05-05, 02:47 PM (ISO 8601)
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Don't forget the treasure map/arcane clue/prophesy tatooed/burnt on to their skin.
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2012-05-05, 03:36 PM (ISO 8601)
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If your parents are alive, you aren't D&D backstorying hard enough. That's a rule to live by.
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2012-05-05, 09:16 PM (ISO 8601)
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My Parents Are Deeeeeeeeaaaaaaaddddd!!!!!
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2012-05-05, 10:06 PM (ISO 8601)
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Hmm... We seem to have forgotten the pendant that the amnesiac orphaned hero possesses which proves that the ransom person they met who decided to join their group for seemingly no reason is their sibling...
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2012-05-05, 11:00 PM (ISO 8601)
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Don't forget to include a bickering love interest he met, most likely in a tavern, with whom he bickers constantly while he angsts about whatever ridiculous thing stands between them being together.
Last edited by vulcanbardmoon; 2012-05-05 at 11:00 PM.
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2012-05-05, 11:46 PM (ISO 8601)
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2012-05-06, 05:13 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Uncreative backstory
π = 4
Consider a 5' radius blast: this affects 4 squares which have a circumference of 40' — Actually it's worse than that.
Completely Dysfunctional Handbook
Warped Druid Handbook
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2012-05-06, 06:01 AM (ISO 8601)
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2012-05-06, 06:21 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Uncreative backstory
π = 4
Consider a 5' radius blast: this affects 4 squares which have a circumference of 40' — Actually it's worse than that.
Completely Dysfunctional Handbook
Warped Druid Handbook
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2012-05-06, 06:24 AM (ISO 8601)
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π = 4
Consider a 5' radius blast: this affects 4 squares which have a circumference of 40' — Actually it's worse than that.
Completely Dysfunctional Handbook
Warped Druid Handbook
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2012-05-06, 07:13 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Uncreative backstory
If you try to subvert this by giving your character a happy, healthy relationship with their family, this relationship will be completely destroyed within the first few sessions. Better* to just kill them off in your backstory and let it be done with.
* Unless your GM is clever, in which case they'll come back as Bodaks hunting you down or something.Last edited by Craft (Cheese); 2012-05-06 at 07:16 AM.
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2012-05-06, 08:06 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Uncreative backstory
Just copy the background story of Senor Vorpal Kickasso.
Black text is for sarcasm, also sincerity. You'll just have to read between the lines and infer from context like an animal
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2012-05-06, 10:09 AM (ISO 8601)
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2012-05-06, 11:43 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Uncreative backstory
π = 4
Consider a 5' radius blast: this affects 4 squares which have a circumference of 40' — Actually it's worse than that.
Completely Dysfunctional Handbook
Warped Druid Handbook
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2012-05-06, 11:54 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Uncreative backstory
It is open to abuse.
Back on topic- it's not about the individual elements- most that aren't just raving gibberish will have been used already, it's about how you combine and flavor them. Really the most effective way to showcase what you seem to be trying to do is to have the character's personality entirely defined by two or three of the most common tropes- have him say things like, "All I have of my parents is this mysterious amulet, I wonder what it could possibly signify," all the time.Last edited by Lord Tyger; 2012-05-06 at 11:59 AM.