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2012-11-08, 03:29 AM (ISO 8601)
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A new spell
How does this spell look to you guys:
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Transmutation
Level: Wizard 1
Components: V, S
Casting Time: 1 minute
Range: Close (25 ft. + 5ft./2 levels)
Target: 1 cubic ft./ level of nonliving solid matter.
Duration: 10 minutes/level
This spell uses various loose things, within the spell's area of effect,
into the desired shape. This shape apears to be made of the glued together
things you used to make it. It can be made of anything fine size or smaller,
such as rocks, shells, leafs, small sticks, etc. If damage done
to the object in battle is greater than or equal to its hit points, the
spell ends, and it crumbles. Outside of battle, if it takes the damage, it
crumbles as well. When the spell ends. When the spell ends normally, the
object crumbles into dust, falling into a small pile, or as the wind directs.
The quality of the item rolls to determine quality.Admiral Cranthis, Inventor of the Cranthis (Sandwich) and the Gnomish Paratroopers, and rider of Chuckles, the dire pig.
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2012-11-08, 04:08 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: A new spell
I like it. Needs some copyediting, and probably a Craft check for complex shapes (like fabricate). Also, it's not obvious how many hit points the constructed shape has, or how effective it is for e.g. making a wrench.
Suggested adjustment:
This spell gathers together loose materials into a desired shape, conglomerating them securely for the duration. Usable materials can include any object Fine or smaller, such as rocks, shells, leafs, small sticks, etc. Complex shapes or fine craftsmanship require an appropriate Craft check, or the spell fails. The constructed shape is sturdy enough for most purposes, but if used for tasks that require Str checks, it breaks on check results of over 20 and the spell ends.
It's possible you need to crank the level up to 2; a transient fabricate, even with a few extra limitations, is quite useful.Last edited by TuggyNE; 2012-11-08 at 04:09 AM.
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2012-11-08, 07:07 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: A new spell
Also suggested:
The tool created has hardness 0 and hit points equal to your caster level (max 5). Such a tool is never considered masterwork.
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2012-11-08, 07:21 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: A new spell
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2012-11-08, 07:28 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: A new spell
The original spell stated the items appeared to be glued together. The magical glue is the weakest link, even if the entire thing was made of rocks.
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