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    Barbarian in the Playground
     
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    I'd like to hear from everyone about what they think of the comic.

    Do you like it coloured (because the best I can do is coloured pencils)?
    Do you prefer it black and white?

    Any suggestions on how to improve it? (My drawing style can be improved, but only slowly...so don't give me a whole paragraph on someone's nose, please..)

    And just the usual "I liked this one because" are allowed, too ^.~ I like approval. I thrive on approval.

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    It's not posted quickly enough! :D

    Other than that it's damn cool. I liked the guest ones quite a bit. And the Order of the Town ones.

    But they are all good! All good!
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    I'm not sure. Granted, it covers some cherished memories and tells the basic story of the town's founding, but large parts of the town's history are missing. There's no coverage on the first guild war. That's be cool, seeing the portrayals of the Legion, the House of Narf, the Gufis, the Troupe, and the None-existant Mob. the fledgling government trying to form up, built around Indurain's imperialism. The Emporer losing his governing powers and the council being formed even as the Legion and the Narfians fight it out, the Mob tries to turn a profit, the Gufis try to keep the peace, and the Troupe just goes aound stabbing everything. That's have some comedic opportunity.


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    Dear gods Renrik, we've only just started, haven't even gotten to all of those yet. Give us some time.
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    Very well. As for the ones I've seen so ar, they are good.


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    I'm a fan of the black and white style. I don't know why, but it seems to work better.
    I'm looking forward to another fight scene or two. I'd like to see one of Lykan vs one of his planar doubles if that's possible. I really enjoyed the Mortia vs Lykan duel.

    Thanks for the kind words, Exachix. Ceika and I are working on a few comics to wrap up our plot that Wu can use when the poor lass needs a break.
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    Love it - specially the one were it's metioned that I wear lingerie - priceless. I even thought of having an avatar made up with Graklok in lingerie.

    I especially enjoy Wukei's art of the individual characters in the extra stuff. I wish there was more of those.

    Oh, and for those reading this forum who are wondering what the comic is....here!

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    All of 'em are good so far. I prefer colored to black and white, for no real reason other than the fact that I like color. I don't have any real suggestions for the comic, besides maybe Hawkeye could make the lettering a little bigger.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Cathrindir View Post
    All of 'em are good so far. I prefer colored to black and white, for no real reason other than the fact that I like color. I don't have any real suggestions for the comic, besides maybe Hawkeye could make the lettering a little bigger.
    Yeah, the lettering is something I'm having a little trouble with. I need to find a font and size that is more readable and allows me to make some of my more wordy panels fit in.

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    *pokes it back to life as another comic comes around*

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    Quote Originally Posted by Graklok View Post
    Love it - specially the one were it's metioned that I wear lingerie - priceless. I even thought of having an avatar made up with Graklok in lingerie.
    Not sure if I'm honored that'd you'd think of doing that, or relieved that you didn't.

    Glad you liked it. We have a few more in reserve now.

    Wu, I enjoyed the Christmas special. I also like the idea of her shooting at Charity who is our resident Bugbear in the Playground. I know that's not the intended idea, but he's probably got it coming.
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    The comic today was enjoyable. I can actually see a reenactment with those characters happening. Can't wait to see the plotline get going again, though. It'll be interesting to see the start of the Town.

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    I loved the introduction to Trog's tavern, that was amazing, the colour made it look great. If I actually had money I would donate some, but my job pays little in the way of mortal money (( roughly translates as: youth who works on a farm for free)). The Christmas special was brilliant though, you hire such dashing people to end the arc.

    The only thing is that you should make sure Charity doesn't get hold of it, he may start a campaign for cruelty to halflings.
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    The main problem I've noticed is a lack of backgrounds. It was paticularly prominent in the colored comic, because the colored characters were just sort of standing there in the white space without a sense of continuity from one panel to the next.

    But overall, it's quite good.
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    Yea, I dislike drawing backgrounds...and honestly...I'm not that good at it. It took 5 hours to do backgrounds for the House of Sneak. I'd like to do backgrounds, and I'm practicing...but until I get the knack for them, it's sorta a style of itself to have no background at all.

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    Anyone who can name all three of Santa's elves in today's comic gets a Wukei Cookie.

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    Gwen, Darius... Dangit... Umm... Blackfox? I have honestly no idea who the last person would be...

    On a differenet note... Cute baby llama!
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    Quote Originally Posted by Lykan View Post

    On a differenet note... Cute baby llama!
    *flies around* He thinks I'm Cuuuuuuuuuuute!
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    Quote Originally Posted by Atreyu the Masked LLama View Post
    *flies around* He thinks I'm Cuuuuuuuuuuute!
    ... If this conversation didn't stem from a comic involving Rudolph, I'd be very confused right now.

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    Lykan gets a Wukei Cookie. Congratulations.

    Very nice catch on the show there, Llama.

    I thought he was cute, too ^.~

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    Quote Originally Posted by Wukei View Post
    I thought he was cute, too ^.~
    Then he grew up.
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    Now you know that's not what I meant....where'd you get the awesome new 'tar?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Death, your friend the Reaper View Post
    Then [the llama] grew up.
    Please tell me the next comic is a colored one of me painting Death's cloak pink!
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    Heh heh...well, seeing as you're the only one that donates....

    No! no...must not be swayed by paying customers... (wait...that just sounds stupid...)

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    Heh...

    *needs to find a way that he can become a paying customer, being that he's already promised $50*

    Cookie! Yay!

    *pounces on cookie, eats cookie*

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    Fan Art section has been added. Finally...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Wukei View Post
    Now you know that's not what I meant....where'd you get the awesome new 'tar?
    Indeed, I did know what you meant, and bad llama, that's a bad idea. Got the basic idea from here, and then since plagiarism is not my style, I just kept referring to it to create one from scratch. Inkscape crashed twice though, so that turned me off ever making an avatar again.
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    Aww...and here I wanted to request one...it's super awesome.

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    i havent been keeping up on the comics, and only just now read them. firstly, a gift from the kender pouch for anyone that gets this refrence
    [voice=spooky]'i am the ghost of a christmas present'[/voice]
    "dont you mean the ghost of christmas present?"
    [v=s]NO! ghost of AAAAAAAA christmas present![/v]

    secondly, as an artist myself i can understand why it would be hard to follow the plot of the town. you just do what insporation... draws you to.

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    *raises hand* that home for imaginary friends thing

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