Would you step into my magical realm? Help writing a campaign in a homebrew setting

[bloodshed343]

I'm typing up a homebrew world for an upcoming campaign. It's still a work in progress, but before I continue I'd like some feedback on what I've done so far.

The primer can be found here:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1...it?usp=sharing

Two new classes, specific to this setting, can be found here: http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showt...custom-setting



I'm pretty good at writing the history of the world, and I could even write a good story, but I've never written an adventure or a campaign. I don't honestly know what I'm getting myself into here. I would like to know what you think would be a good adventure hook in this setting.

[ReturnOfTheKing]

Sorry to be a pain, but this should really go in the World-Building Forums

[bloodshed343]

Sorry to be a pain, but this should really go in the World-Building Forums

My passive perception is terrible. I didn't even know there was a subforum for world building.