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    Titan in the Playground
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    Default Veilbound Blade (PoW/Akashic Mysteries Theurge, PEACH)

    I have written a draft of an akashic/initiator theurge class, the veilbound blade, located on a google doc here, intended to be a martial class combining maneuvers and veils/essence burn mechanics to be a formidable combatant.

    It is unfortunately light on fluff, which is not my greatest strength. Please take a look and give me any feedback/criticisms you have. Thanks.

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    Pixie in the Playground
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    Default Re: Veilbound Blade (PoW/Akashic Mysteries Theurge, PEACH)

    Well first off let me state that it sounds pretty intriguing. Secondly, I'd love to check out your work, so that's what I'm doing as I type. Care to look at mine while we're at it?
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    Pixie in the Playground
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    Default Re: Veilbound Blade (PoW/Akashic Mysteries Theurge, PEACH)

    Veilweaving:...
    References an "amplifier" three separate times. Am I missing something?

    Akashic Recovery (Su): the veilbound
    Should match formatting of ": The veilbound--"

    -Blade Chakra(Su):
    Space between (Su).

    -Veil-rending recovery:
    Formatting again, capitalize throughout.


    Overall looks fun. I didn't see any balance issues, though I'm not the best at that sort of thing.
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    Titan in the Playground
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    Default Re: Veilbound Blade (PoW/Akashic Mysteries Theurge, PEACH)

    Quote Originally Posted by MojoBojangles View Post
    References an "amplifier" three separate times. Am I missing something?


    Should match formatting of ": The veilbound--"


    Space between (Su).


    Formatting again, capitalize throughout.


    Overall looks fun. I didn't see any balance issues, though I'm not the best at that sort of thing.
    Copy paste from another class for consistent language, thought I editted it, must not have. More concerned with mechanics than typos at this stage, generally speaking. Thanks for looking.

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    Pixie in the Playground
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    Default Re: Veilbound Blade (PoW/Akashic Mysteries Theurge, PEACH)

    Quote Originally Posted by stack View Post
    Copy paste from another class for consistent language, thought I editted it, must not have. More concerned with mechanics than typos at this stage, generally speaking. Thanks for looking.
    Yeah I figured you were probably wondering more along mechanics, but nothing jumped out at me that way. No problem.
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