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    Bugbear in the Playground
     
    Grynning's Avatar

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    Default New Rogue archetype - "Jack"

    Fairy tale month continues! Here's a trickster-ish rogue based on a very well-known stock hero:
    http://forgotmydice.com/index.php/20...jack-be-quick/
    My friend and I have a blog, we write D&D stuff there: http://forgotmydice.com/



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    A Guide to Commonly Misunderstood 5th Edition Rules

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    Bugbear in the Playground
     
    Flumph

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    Feb 2012

    Default Re: New Rogue archetype - "Jack"

    The biggest problem you have with this archetype is that it is far more complicated than it needs to be. What should be a couple of sentences is a large paragraph and split into 3 abilities. Don't get me wrong you have a strong concept but it needs to be pruned especially when Convincing Boast is arguably better than Panache.

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