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    Orc in the Playground
     
    Devil

    Join Date
    May 2008
    Location
    Oklahoma
    Gender
    Male

    Default Water Witch Warlock 'Archetype'/Rework [PEACH]

    http://homebrewery.naturalcrit.com/share/r1WlgcN_m-

    Was making a custom archetype for a homebrew setting, and it ended up kinda tweaking the entire class. Interested in any feedback at all.
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    I Am A: Neutral Good Human Cleric (4th Level)
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    Ability Scores:
    Strength-13
    Dexterity-13
    Constitution-16
    Intelligence-17
    Wisdom-14
    Charisma-15

    Completely random lol

    "So you're suggesting that I put down my sword, you put down your rock, and we try and kill each other like civilized people?"
    "I could always kill you with the rock..."

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    Dwarf in the Playground
    Join Date
    Apr 2017

    Default Re: Water Witch Warlock 'Archetype'/Rework [PEACH]

    Wet Warlocks
    Hey these look like fun, especially for water campaigns (which I'm assuming these were made for)
    Some of the 10th level abilities seem a little powerful to my eye? Just comparing them to warlock levels. But not overpowered I think. The ranged attack one (Wall of Wind) may need a little tweaking. All the abilities are really unique though, well done on those. I especially like the sweating one, seems a cool idea.
    There's a few spelling mistakes here and there but as this is not 100% finished I'm sure you can pick them up with a couple of read throughs (ones i remember. cherised instead of cherished. breifly instead of briefly. noticied instead of noticed )

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