I'm looking for some beta readers for Kobold Splatbook. (1 Chapter above 1500 words)

[Bortasz]

Hello.
I'm writing a splat book about Kobolds. And just finished chapter about Theology and could use that some other people read it.

I'm mostly interested in answers to does question:
Did you have problem with understanding anything?
What part you liked?
What part you disliked?
What part I should expand and/or clarify?
Did anything was missing?
But will accept all constructive Feedback.

If you are interested pleas send PM me your email and I will send the chapter as an odt file to you.
Pleas do not share it. I plan on publishing/Selling it.

[NRSASD]

What format is the file in?

[Boci]

What system is the a splatbook for? An edition of D&D? Or is there an RPG called Kobolds?

[Bortasz]

What format is the file in?

ODT is from Open Office format.

What system is the a splatbook for? An edition of D&D? Or is there an RPG called Kobolds?

It will be mostly for Pathfinder and D&D. But most information are Lore. Not mechanic. So should be to use for many people that use different editions.

[noob]

Is it for those editions where kobolds are small dragons or for an edition where kobold are creature with some morphological traits of dogs?

[Bortasz]

Is it for those editions where kobolds are small dragons or for an edition where kobold are creature with some morphological traits of dogs?

This kind of Kobolds