Partially completed one-shot dungeon

[ExplodingRat]

I only started playing D&D a few months go, and so far I've completed a couple of short campaigns with a couple different DMs. Since I have a few ideas of my own, I decided to give it a shot myself by writing a one-shot dungeon for the group I usually play in to go through. It's not actually finished yet, but I want to know what I'm doing right or wrong so far with some (hopefully) helpful advice from more experienced DMs. Here's what I have so far: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1...it?usp=sharing
So, how is it?

[snafuy]

I like it! You're off to a good start. Suggestions:

If you plan to share this with other people, you probably shouldn't call the PCs murder hobos in the first sentence.

The player action notes are a great idea. I'd recommend including the less-loved skills. For example, figuring out the flesh pile should allow a Medicine check.