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    The wrestling scenes are pretty well made, I think.
    Quote Originally Posted by J.R.R. Tolkien, 1955
    I thought Tom Bombadil dreadful — but worse still was the announcer's preliminary remarks that Goldberry was his daughter (!), and that Willowman was an ally of Mordor (!!).

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    I regret about everything I wrote last week.
    Snout should ditch her, and run away as fast as he can.

    It's not because I lack sympathy.
    While I don't know exactly what she is angry about (maybe the lack of clothing?), considering her origin I'm guessing she has a good reason.
    Still, even a trained therapist will call security if he is attacked physically, and IF he decides to continue treating the same patient, some precautions will be taken.

    Snout does not have the training nor the support to even consider handling random rage attacks from someone who can punch through a brick wall without warning.
    Full sympathy and caring will come AFTER keeping a safe distance and keeping himself alive.

    There is also the famous saying: "If something happens once it's unlikely to happen again, but if it happens twice it will surely happen a third time"

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    Update

    This is why I hate the journal.
    It started as "I'm going to challenge myself", where a deaf person would force the writer/drawer to use more of "show don't tell"

    There was a scene, it was perfectly understandable by the drawing (other than the "run for your life" it was EXACTLY my last post), but then the journal page just had to come and retell the same thing.

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    As a reader it can be repetitive, however as character behavior it makes total sense. This is how snout thinks and processes events. He records them in his journal and uses that to come to terms with things that have happened. Its a perfectly reasonable thing to do and it in fact does share new information, such as his reaction beyond flinching away to being hit. This journal is how we learn the specifics of his reactions and thoughts on things rather than just having to guess based off of body language.
    "Interdum feror cupidine partium magnarum Europae vincendarum"
    Translation: "Sometimes I get this urge to conquer large parts of Europe."

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    Traab is yelling everything that I'm thinking already.
    "If you don't get those cameras out of my face, I'm gonna go 8.6 on the Richter scale with gastric emissions that'll clear this room."

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    But Snout is not a real person, he's a character created by an author.
    His liking of the journal exists only because the author wants him to, and he wants him to because it serves as a crouch to bypass his own restriction.

    Yes, I would like the comic to be based only on the drawing.
    If not, at least one that relies less on the journal.
    That's the point of restricting yourself, isn't it?

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    I think that there are three situations with the diary. The first situation, when it is used as a way to show something unexpected and so can contain some irony or add certain feelings (like with the "too scared to leave this place" game, not really the diary, but still Snout's writing).

    The second situation is inspired by videogames, and it was the descent into the hut (you know, the PC arrives after the disaster and find pieces of paper or files gradually explaining what happened).

    The third one is like now, when the diary is something of a hindrance. Snout could have been shown in a few panels in which he sits alone, pensive, worried, aching, and sad, as he comes to the thought balloon "I can't help her".
    Quote Originally Posted by J.R.R. Tolkien, 1955
    I thought Tom Bombadil dreadful — but worse still was the announcer's preliminary remarks that Goldberry was his daughter (!), and that Willowman was an ally of Mordor (!!).

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    Quote Originally Posted by Vinyadan View Post
    I think that there are three situations with the diary. The first situation, when it is used as a way to show something unexpected and so can contain some irony or add certain feelings (like with the "too scared to leave this place" game, not really the diary, but still Snout's writing).

    The second situation is inspired by videogames, and it was the descent into the hut (you know, the PC arrives after the disaster and find pieces of paper or files gradually explaining what happened).

    The third one is like now, when the diary is something of a hindrance. Snout could have been shown in a few panels in which he sits alone, pensive, worried, aching, and sad, as he comes to the thought balloon "I can't help her".
    Even the thought balloon is not required since that was pretty much obvious.

    I think the best use of the journal is to limit it to something like the "captain's log" in Star Trek.
    Use it at a beginning of a story to write goals or where he is currently at, and then IF NEEDED, at the end to give additional information for the epilogue, something that wasn't obvious from the chapter itself.

    Some exceptions like the game with the stones can be added, but the priority is always on showing without writing.

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    Update

    "Come on, let's go, you can beat me up later"

    And STILL naked, even after finding actual cloth just hanging there.

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    Wow, looks like a non-sequitur. Maybe Snout is supposed to look heroic now, deliberately sacrificing himself?
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    I thought Tom Bombadil dreadful — but worse still was the announcer's preliminary remarks that Goldberry was his daughter (!), and that Willowman was an ally of Mordor (!!).

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    No im thinking its more, "I may not be able to help her, lets hope we find someone better soon." He doesnt want to just abandon her because he is aware of at least some of the horror she has been through and the idea of leaving a traumatized naked woman in the middle of nowhere doesnt appeal to him despite the risk. But yeah, the lack of clothes is getting stupid.
    "Interdum feror cupidine partium magnarum Europae vincendarum"
    Translation: "Sometimes I get this urge to conquer large parts of Europe."

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    Traab is yelling everything that I'm thinking already.
    "If you don't get those cameras out of my face, I'm gonna go 8.6 on the Richter scale with gastric emissions that'll clear this room."

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    Quote Originally Posted by Traab View Post
    No im thinking its more, "I may not be able to help her, lets hope we find someone better soon." He doesnt want to just abandon her because he is aware of at least some of the horror she has been through and the idea of leaving a traumatized naked woman in the middle of nowhere doesnt appeal to him despite the risk. But yeah, the lack of clothes is getting stupid.
    More likely "I may not be able to help her, but I'm sure the author will toss a solution to my general direction soon"

    Still think the logical thing is to run away, but it's not something really important.
    The logical thing would have been to go backwards toward Mongreltown where he knows there are people that might be able to help, but from a story perspective both going backwards or running away is a bad option, so as long as she doesn't hit him a third time, I guess that's the only proper choice.

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    Quote Originally Posted by random11 View Post
    More likely "I may not be able to help her, but I'm sure the author will toss a solution to my general direction soon"
    I mean he already had a pretty good "Alright, alright, I'll follow your stupid railroad plot DM author.“ at some points*, so... head canon accepted.

    *Like before he went into the basement of the vine cabin.
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    If it is dead it can be eaten."

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    Wait, is Snout actually finally making clothing for vine lady? Or is he just sewing himself a blanket?
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    Quote Originally Posted by Celestia View Post
    Wait, is Snout actually finally making clothing for vine lady? Or is he just sewing himself a blanket?
    Now I want mookie to troll us over this. We learn next comic its a parachute because they need to jump down a cliff face and they just leave it behind them when they land.
    "Interdum feror cupidine partium magnarum Europae vincendarum"
    Translation: "Sometimes I get this urge to conquer large parts of Europe."

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    Traab is yelling everything that I'm thinking already.
    "If you don't get those cameras out of my face, I'm gonna go 8.6 on the Richter scale with gastric emissions that'll clear this room."

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    Quote Originally Posted by Traab View Post
    Now I want mookie to troll us over this. We learn next comic its a parachute because they need to jump down a cliff face and they just leave it behind them when they land.
    Or worse: since his overalls are wet, he's decided to abandon them and just make new clothes for himself. Of course, the overalls will be dry by the time he wakes up, but they're both just going to leave them behind.
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    Well, she can wear something now since we have Big-Dong dream sequences in this chapter to fill this gap.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Celestia View Post
    Or worse: since his overalls are wet, he's decided to abandon them and just make new clothes for himself. Of course, the overalls will be dry by the time he wakes up, but they're both just going to leave them behind.
    Well its starting to get cold so he needs a sweater to go with his overalls. He will keep them both, nude girl stays nude.
    "Interdum feror cupidine partium magnarum Europae vincendarum"
    Translation: "Sometimes I get this urge to conquer large parts of Europe."

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    Traab is yelling everything that I'm thinking already.
    "If you don't get those cameras out of my face, I'm gonna go 8.6 on the Richter scale with gastric emissions that'll clear this room."

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    Wow. Even in his dreams, Snout is condemned to be a victim of terrible slapstick. That poor man.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Celestia View Post
    Wow. Even in his dreams, Snout is condemned to be a victim of terrible slapstick. That poor man.
    One could say that "he's living the dream"!
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    I thought Tom Bombadil dreadful — but worse still was the announcer's preliminary remarks that Goldberry was his daughter (!), and that Willowman was an ally of Mordor (!!).

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