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2021-04-08, 11:27 AM (ISO 8601)
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Mara: A webcomic about the littlest barbarian!
Latest page can always be found at the homepage.
First page can be found through the archives or at this link.
Follow the titular character, Mara, a young girl from a small fishing village, as she tries to manage the power of an ancestral spirit she wasn't prepared to receive. As she ventures from the broken tatters of her own little tribe into the larger world on a quest for revenge, she learns how much bigger the world is than herself, and how deeply entrenched her enemy really is.
The comic is available in English, Spanish, Portuguese, and Traditional Chinese. Updates every Thursday. I'm the writer, and I'm happy to answer questions or listen to feedback.
Oh and we also have a TV Tropes page!
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2021-04-09, 07:20 AM (ISO 8601)
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- Feb 2009
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- New Jersey
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Re: Mara: A webcomic about the littlest barbarian!
Ooh, sounds like a cool idea! I just bookmarked it so I can follow.
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2021-04-09, 12:23 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Mara: A webcomic about the littlest barbarian!
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2021-04-10, 03:20 AM (ISO 8601)
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- Jun 2013
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- Bristol, UK
Re: Mara: A webcomic about the littlest barbarian!
You have one page? That's not much yet, how often will you update?
The end of what Son? The story? There is no end. There's just the point where the storytellers stop talking.
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2021-04-10, 01:47 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Mara: A webcomic about the littlest barbarian!
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2021-04-10, 11:55 PM (ISO 8601)
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- Jan 2006
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- Maryland
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Re: Mara: A webcomic about the littlest barbarian!
That's well and good, but that means you have very little bait on your hook, so to speak. There's not enough current content to convince someone to come back. If you only get one first impression to hook a reader into sticking around, then a title page, one intro page, and a blurb isn't going to cut it. Perhaps try again after one or two dozen pages or whenever there's enough content to show me why I should stay.
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2021-04-11, 02:13 AM (ISO 8601)
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- Aug 2017
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Re: Mara: A webcomic about the littlest barbarian!
Is this another D&D webcomic?
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2021-04-11, 05:41 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Mara: A webcomic about the littlest barbarian!