PEACH Exchange

[Jeff the Green]

It's not an uncommon occurrence that a piece of homebrew that someone worked for days on goes unPEACHed, which is a shame. So here's the deal. Use this thread to do one of three things:

1. Post links to one or more of your homebrew that you would like PEACHed.
2. Offer to PEACH a piece of homebrew someone has already posted in exchange for PEACHing a piece of your own homebrew.
3. Agree to or decline an offer of PEACH exchange.

Sound like a good idea?

I'll start us off with three 3.5 prestige classes I wrote recently as part of a triptych:

• Faerie Champion, a class for warrior-types who want to devote themselves to serving a Faerie Lord in exchange for power.
• Faerie Court Mage, a class for spellcasters who want to use the powers of faerie to enhance their own magic.
• Faerie-Thrall Liberator, a class for anyone who wishes to combat fey and rescue those who were kidnapped by them.

[Sherishade]

Hello ya I was thinking the same thing, this is a good idea.

I don't know what PEACH means but I gather its short hand for review my stuff and tell me what you think. So here's my link and I'll leave my comments on your original homebrew posts ^^

Dark Inheritor

[Jormengand]

Hello ya I was thinking the same thing, this is a good idea.

I don't know what PEACH means but I gather its short hand for review my stuff and tell me what you think. So here's my link and I'll leave my comments on your original homebrew posts ^^

Dark Inheritor

On it. If you could do either/both of the things in my sig that'd be great.

[Zman]

Just gave a basic PEACH for Dark Inheritor prior to seeing this thread.


Here is my Dragon Ascendant Base Class

[AmberVael]

I don't know what PEACH means but I gather its short hand for review my stuff and tell me what you think.

You're right! PEACH stands for Please Evaluate And Criticize Honestly.
Or something along those lines. It has been a while since I've seen the acronym spelled out in full, so I'm too cautious to say it with 100% certainty, but I'll give it 90% confidence.

I'm actually in the process of writing up a new set of invocations (9 out of 12 complete thus far), I may toss a link here once I have them done.

[Jormengand]

Just gave a basic PEACH for Dark Inheritor prior to seeing this thread.


Here is my Dragon Ascendant Base Class

I'll have a look. Again, PEACHes on the Honour Guard PF class and Descend Into Madness game system (in my sig) would be appreciated.

[Grod_The_Giant]

I'll trade you a look at your system for a look at mine. (STaRS, in my sig)

[scarmiglionne4]

Hello ya I was thinking the same thing, this is a good idea.

I don't know what PEACH means but I gather its short hand for review my stuff and tell me what you think. So here's my link and I'll leave my comments on your original homebrew posts ^^

Dark Inheritor

I left you some feedback on the Dark Inheritor. Please check out my Enhancements.

[Jormengand]

I'll trade you a look at your system for a look at mine. (STaRS, in my sig)

Deal, although for all your S-ness I think mine's probably a little simpler. :p

[Grod_The_Giant]

Deal, although for all your S-ness I think mine's probably a little simpler. :p

I can always break out SuperSTaRS (It's a thing)

[Jormengand]

I can always break out SuperSTaRS (It's a thing)

Okaaaaay.

Anyway, consider yourself PEACHed. Clarification available on request.

[scarmiglionne4]

This thread was a good idea, but I don't think this is working as well as it could be.

[Zman]

This thread was a good idea, but I don't think this is working as would as it could be.

I agree, we need to keep it current and keep it active.

Here is my Homebrew. Dragon Ascendant Base Class

[Jeff the Green]

True. Part of that is to spread the word; if you like, put it in your sig. Also, I posted PEACHes for Sherishade and Zman.

[toapat]

the problem with threads like these is that they end up being screwed by not becoming stickied.

In other news, i would like commentary on my Weapon of Destiny and Paladin

[Zman]

True. Part of that is to spread the word; if you like, put it in your sig. Also, I posted PEACHes for Sherishade and Zman.

And I posted for your Fairie Curt Mage and Champion classes.

[TheWombatOfDoom]

Someone interested in PEACHing my magic system in exchange for me PEACHing them? It's got a tad bit of reading, but I love how it's turning out. The Second Post comprimises the magic portion of things, and you can ignore pretty much anything else in the other sections. Be aware it's a setting mechanics, not game mechanics.

Any takers?

[Jormengand]

Someone interested in PEACHing my magic system in exchange for me PEACHing them? It's got a tad bit of reading, but I love how it's turning out. The second post comprimises the magic portion of things, and you can ignore pretty much anything else in the other sections.

Any takers?

Give me a link, and go peach Descend Into Madness (in my sig).

[TheWombatOfDoom]

Give me a link, and go peach Descend Into Madness (in my sig).

Oops, meant to link that.... Post 2

Alright, I look into it. :) No promises on today being PEACHed, but soon.

[GoddessSune]

In other news, i would like commentary on my Weapon of Destiny and Paladin

How do we reply? post on this thread?

[Jormengand]

How do we reply? post on this thread?

Go "Yes, I'll have a look, but would you look at [whatever] for me?" on this thread, then actually do the evaluation on the separate thread.

[Grelna the Blue]

It's not an uncommon occurrence that a piece of homebrew that someone worked for days on goes unPEACHed, which is a shame. So here's the deal. Use this thread to do one of three things:

1. Post links to one or more of your homebrew that you would like PEACHed.
2. Offer to PEACH a piece of homebrew someone has already posted in exchange for PEACHing a piece of your own homebrew.
3. Agree to or decline an offer of PEACH exchange.

Sound like a good idea?

I'll start us off with three 3.5 prestige classes I wrote recently as part of a triptych:

• Faerie Champion, a class for warrior-types who want to devote themselves to serving a Faerie Lord in exchange for power.
• Faerie Court Mage, a class for spellcasters who want to use the powers of faerie to enhance their own magic.
• Faerie-Thrall Liberator, a class for anyone who wishes to combat fey and rescue those who were kidnapped by them.

I just looked over and critiqued the Faerie Court Mage (like it a lot, btw). Anyone feel like giving some feedback on the design of the 5th level spell I just posted: Sun Scarabs?

[scarmiglionne4]

Jormengand, I PEACHed your Descend Into Madness.
Grelna, I PEACHED Sun Scarabs.

Links in my signature.

[Hanuman]

Links in my signature.

PEACH'd grit rules.

http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=153536

Working on an organ feature, the newest draft is as the back. Appreciate some feedback on expanding it and getting it polished. Lots of stuff to write.

[scarmiglionne4]

PEACH'd grit rules.

http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showthread.php?t=153536

Working on an organ feature, the newest draft is as the back. Appreciate some feedback on expanding it and getting it polished. Lots of stuff to write.

I had seen this before you PEACHed my work. I didn't know what to say about it. I cannot say I have ever seen anything like it. ALthough it does sort of remind me of Zato from Guilty Gear.

It seems to be balanced well. I can honestly say I would have no interest in playing an Ozodrin. It is a little aberrant and chaotic for me, but I suppose that is the point, right? I wish I could offer a better critique, but I am just at a loss.

Anything else you need critiqued?

[Iamyourking]

I reviewed the Faerie Champion and am now looking for someone to critique Sons of the Fallen (in my signature). I'm willing to do more if they get posted, but so far most of them have already received more or less what I would say.

[Jeff the Green]

Okay. Everyone has pretty much ignored my original guidelines, which is fine, since they probably would have made things too cumbersome. The way it is now, though, may result in PEACH moochers without some sort of karma system. Would y'all prefer an explicit karma (probably PEACH given : PEACH received or PEACH given : PEACH requested ratios) that is kept on the first post, or an informal, generalized karma of not bothering to PEACH someone who has requested plenty of PEACHes and not given many back but without an official count?

And partially to remind myself, I owe PEACHes to Iamyourking and Grelna the Blue. If anyone else wants to PEACH the Faerie-Thrall Liberator (in my sig), I'd appreciate it since the only PEACH it's received was a generalized "maybe too powerful" one.

[Hanuman]

I had seen this before you PEACHed my work. I didn't know what to say about it. I cannot say I have ever seen anything like it. ALthough it does sort of remind me of Zato from Guilty Gear.

It seems to be balanced well. I can honestly say I would have no interest in playing an Ozodrin. It is a little aberrant and chaotic for me, but I suppose that is the point, right? I wish I could offer a better critique, but I am just at a loss.

Anything else you need critiqued?

Not at the moment, Kellus and I are thinking of whipping something up, and I will need a LOT of playtest for a project I've been ramping up after that. If you're interested in doing some early testing or critique shoot me a message and I'll leave it checked unread and I'll alert you when I need some freedback off the pre-release draft.

[Zman]

Did a quick PEACH on Faerie Thrall Liberator.

Still looking for more imput in my Dragon Ascendant

[Tanuki Tales]

I would appreciate any PEACHing for my Limber Ones. I'd like to finally close the door on them so that I can move on to my next Project G entry.

I'll gladly give PEACHes in return, as I'm able.