Quote Originally Posted by AlterForm View Post
If I could step in with a few things that I think could make the sword even better?

The blade still looks a bit on the thing side. Note how wide the blade is compared to the hilt; it occupies about 3 times as much "visual space."

The hilt is also misaligned slightly at the moment. That or the hilt-wrapping is causing an optical illusion (a definite possibility that should still be addressed).

Lastly, the curve at the bottom of his shoulder on his right foreleg is sticking out from behind the sword. Because it doesn't clearly connect to anything, they eye wants to assume it's part of the sword, which looks very strange. You should be able to safely remove that bit there since the shoulder is mostly obscured by the joint anyway.
Ah, okay. Thanks



Better now? I think? *crosses fingers*