EDIT: Ok, how's this?
I couldn't get the metallic glint around his eyes to look right so I left it off... it kept looking like he had a black eye when I tried. Changes are easy, though, so let me know if you want anything done differently.
Ceika, once again you've done a great job. Thank you!
Ironically, the line that I'm guessing is supposed to be the neckline of the shirt looks like the necklace I was planning on adding to the character. You be psychic :P.
I follow a general rule: better to ask and be told no than not to ask at all.