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Thread: The Minds of Almantha

  1. 2012-05-03, 05:36 PM (ISO 8601) - Top - End - #54
    Landis963
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    Default Re: The Minds of Almantha

    I like this. I like this a lot. However, I'm not sure how the springwater archives would work.

    I've got it. Aqua and Dekon wove a series of coincidences to get a water mage working for the library, specifically so that this sort of memory transfer could be stored all the way in Dekonio. That second scenario actually works the best for Dekon's character, and Aqua probably wouldn't care or would take a capricious joy in changing a single person's fate so utterly. (not that "fate" is something I plan to care about in this world, I tried a prophecy earlier but it just wouldn't work).

    EDIT: also, a few quibbles: it's "nomon" for both singular and plural and species names like "human", "kobold" or "dung beetle" aren't capitalized.
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