So... im reading fanfiction. And,

[Rogerd]

Do not read fanfiction on ff.net, most of it is total dross and of extremely low, or poor calibre. If you want good fanfiction go to:

http://forums.spacebattles.com/forum...ve-writing.18/

Most of the stuff is of a higher calibre, and reviewers will generally tell the author, exactly what they think and how to improve it.