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    Default Re: Shards - A Homebrew System of my own design

    Looks interesting.
    When you explain how to distribute points on attributes you say 8 is the optimal number, then in the example it says you can distribute 7 points in the following ways followed by some examples of 8 points. I am guessing it should be 8 instead of 7 and it is just a missclick.

    Edit:
    Looking at the classetes you might want to change some of the descriptions on some of the classetes. Enchantment and Hemomance in particular, but i would also change all the ones that refering to classes and stuff from other games (Shapeshifter, Vis and so on.)
    Last edited by Ninjaman; 2014-05-10 at 02:57 PM.
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