The bard seems to be getting way more attention and rightfully so, it's an awesome idea in fluff and something I've wanted for a while (a cha-based minion-master and a bard who's not totally lame fluff-wise). That being said, the 14th level ability being a straight-up rip off of the Necromancer command undead seemed too derivative for me, espcially considering the 6th level feature is so much like the Wizard's undead thralls. Thus, I've kept the 14th level feature as an undead dominate effect, but one that works VERY differently than the wizards and has a more "bard" feel to it. However, it may be too busted/broken. So I want thoughts on it! All and all I think the bard is comming along nicely and may have to get a nicer-looking doc.

I'm also working on an undead minion-focused sorcerer origin that I'll post later, so stay tuned for more necromancy!