Magic the Gathering XXII: Where Puns Go to Die

[Fable Wright]

I'd sort of like to stay away from blue for this, I've already got several blue decks, and I'm trying to expand my style away from just playing more Draw-Go. Do you think cutting maybe two or three lands and maybe one Zealous Persecution for a playset of Gather the Townsfolk would be better?

That would indeed be a good move.

Also, Fable, when you say generic answers, do you think what I have is a good start or do you have any other suggestions?

Something like Kataki or Stony Silence for Affinity instead of Sundering Growth, Ethersworn Canonist/Rule of Law/Eidolon of Rhetoric against Ad Nauseum, and Kor Firewalker against burn.