Quote Originally Posted by Tawmis View Post
Based off the outline - here's what I've come up with.
I like it a lot! I love the background you came up with for the attack, which I never thought of even explaining.

As for critisism: I kind of would have liked the event to be kept a bit more mysterious for Neivara. I like that I know why what happened to her parents happened, but not necessarily that she would understand it entirely.
Also, not entirely sold on Vrocks, as I would have liked something a bit more human-like and yet demonic. But that's a small detail, I can probably find something else scrolling through the DMG :)

Thanks a lot buddy. Definitely going to use this!