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    Quote Originally Posted by Quartz View Post
    Then you should use dashes

    "The current best fits are the Xenocrysth - a character from another comic - and the protean."

    vs

    "The current best fits are the Xenocrysth, a character from another comic, and the protean."

    Parentheses also work.
    ...no, see, the Xenocrysth is not a character from another comic. The dashes would be worse, going from "ambiguous" to "clearly saying the incorrect thing".
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    Quote Originally Posted by jamieth View Post
    ...though Talla does her best to sound objective and impartial, it doesn't cover stuff like "ask a 9-year-old to tank for the party."
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